Isn't It a Bankrupt Company? How Come We Have a Global Monopoly?

I would like to ask a veteran who is in his forties and wanders around the flowers, and he is reborn as an innocent little virgin? And the way he handles problems is simply childish and terrifying. Also, my sister was obviously capable at the beginning, but you always wrote her like a follower.

Is stock trading done on the big screen? And what kind of ghosts were around when the pig's feet were first fried? One person is always there to persuade me, and I will persuade you every time I buy something. One is always there to be surprised.

Can't you learn some research and invention technologies? It feels like you are just like the character water, and you take care of everything in one stroke. What's the point?

It doesn't look good, so you bet at the beginning? I wonder if the author has a problem? Not saying whether there is any legal responsibility. Just say that since the protagonist can solve the problem by gambling, why does he still use acquisition? Isn't it possible to increase capital directly? And the protagonist is also the major shareholder! Too childish

In the early stage, the reader must be entertained, and at the very least, it must not make people feel confused or aggrieved. Otherwise, your story will be over. In a book like yours, in order to make it more enjoyable, the game should be strengthened appropriately, and the daily life of elves should not be mentioned too often. After all, it is in opposition to the protagonist. If you mention it too often, it will only make people annoying. Secondly, even if you don't want the protagonist to become stronger so quickly, you still need to point out the protagonist's power at the beginning, that is, what is the golden finger? Otherwise, it will only make people think that the protagonist is incompetent and furious, which is not what most readers want to see, and it means that you will be disappointed. I'll say this much for now. If I say too much, I'm afraid I'll stop you from writing.

I'll just say one thing about this book, **, it's wrong, and Su Qingyi in the early stage is too annoying. This is just my personal opinion.

You wrote about a man who will always be eighteen years old, and it will be almost finished when you turn nineteen.

Just talking without evidence. It's either a bet or a rebate. That's still a joke.

Let's not talk about anything else, but Qian's fourth dimension doesn't talk about apostles, but he can defeat the Devouring Demon. What about the Ice Dragon? Lord of the City of Light? Golden stone giant? You're cutting it too hard.

How should I put it, it feels a bit disappointing. A person who has only played games traveled to the elf world and could directly fight with Du, and the most outrageous thing is that he still won! ! !

Chapter 17 is banned, and then we have to wait for it to be reviewed again

作者你是看玄幻小说看晕头了吗？常识都不懂，就别蹭热度了