Supernatural: I Have a Small World

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I think there must be something wrong with the protagonist's character. He is afraid of this and that. He clearly knows that someone is harming him, but in the end he doesn't even have the thought of revenge. What a fool! If you don't understand once and for all, it's just stupid to trouble you many times and still don't understand. And you've had the golden finger in your hands for so many years, and you're still so useless. What a bastard, and I didn't let you engage in mass murder. Just ask your mother, why don't you just find an uninhabited land and devour it? I don't believe that there were still people in that era who were engaged in protecting the environment.

Why didn't you destroy the corpses of the Taoist priests after you killed them? Many of them were buried.

Yu Canhua wants to kill the protagonist twice, but the protagonist still wants to keep her to do things. What he said is not that she looks beautiful, but what is the result? I didn't keep her just because she was pretty, ****, it was so ****, it didn't feel good at all. Wasn't it easy to find someone to do something in those days? The protagonist is still a cultivator, he can control it casually, don't leave those excuses, you **** are real people

This world is always like this. The holy light emitted by good people is far greater than that of gods, and the evil energy emitted by bad people is more powerful than demons. What kind of shit does this world look like?

The writing is not straightforward, I have my own little world and I don't know how to develop it, and I have so many worries about fighting. It's heart-breaking to watch. *

After traveling through six years, I am still a weakling...

Hodgepodge! What a mess! The main character is still a childish idiot! Ignorant and fearless!

This small world is so used in a petty way

The latest chapter has passed 11 years all of a sudden. I don't even introduce the previous heroine. She also cultivates herself to be a celibate ~ and her strength has improved by a small amount ~ the big demon is still weak, and the protagonist is still practicing god ~ author, if you write like this~ you will fall down~

As a modern person, in order to write more content, the author spent a lot of time describing fighting scenes. Unfortunately, you don't know that readers are annoyed by these the most. Do we need intense fighting? No, what we want to see is a modern man using various means to directly destroy the enemy, rather than not knowing how to adapt. Yes, he just doesn't know how to adapt. Is the protagonist training to fight? No, it's for the sake of immortality. You always ask the protagonist to fight without using weapons. You just think that others know how to use a machete when fighting. As for you, good guy, it makes people speechless.

You are procrastinating a bit too much, so many pictures have passed, and you haven't even passed a quarter of the cemetery yet. You keep talking about what is there and what is missing. I am going to die when it goes down like this.

Dig directly through the center of the earth and destroy the world

The landlady in The Adventure of the Brave is pretty good

Captain Dragonfly, the referee robot, comes to meet us! First, never act out of emotion; second, never miss a single bad decision; third, never let the referee be fair and beautiful.

There is a golden finger in the small world. Summoning flow is the best way to go in the early stage.

There is a reason why it is not popular. Lost the watermelon and picked up the sesame seeds.

This novel is not without promise, but it really needs improvement. First of all, the setting of the protagonist's fate is really **. It is better to change to the protagonist's way of heaven and add power to himself. The sum of the peaks of all players is equal to the protagonist's strength. As for whether it will be too strong and have an impact? The protagonist shouldn't take action anyway. Secondly, the official handling is too sloppy. Even if you have an official discussion, you will still be afraid of choosing to observe in the end, or use your strength to intimidate the official when the protagonist is overwhelmed. It is better than this. Finally, the story is not rigorous. Charging money in the protagonist's game is equivalent to being strong. So does the currency official being able to print money at any time mean that everyone is at their peak? There are some other things that I won't go into details... They need to be improved.

One word is spring bug, two words are useless Comparing a person of several decades to a protagonist who is less than ten years old is already embarrassing enough in itself. If you win, it's fine. If you lose, it won't be embarrassing. The key is that beating a child who is only a few years old when you are dozens of years old seems to be something to be proud of. So what if you beat him? Prove that you can beat a three-year-old? The most critical thing is those elders. The protagonist has just entered the sect and hasn't even started practicing yet, so they are eager for others to challenge the protagonist. Is it possible that someone who is decades old can defeat the protagonist, and then he can prove that the protagonist is not talented? Or do you prove that the protagonist is not strong enough? Isn't this nonsense? .

You know clearly that the world is dangerous, but you still do business like a salted fish

A loose immortal can't beat an transformed god. It's ridiculous.

Author, have you forgotten about Twinkle? It's already been a hundred chapters and I can't see anyone anymore. Don't you want your book title?

I came in because of the cover.

Celebi is here, but where is Xiaogang? The Three Divine Birds are clearly at the master level. Can Zeraora, the second-level god, not be able to defeat them? Or is Zeraora lost?

Is this the Holy Virgin who wants to refund the money? **

Author, are you sure you can open it? This tarpaulin is not measured by kilograms, but by tons. What kind of arm strength can you pull such a big tarpaulin?

The writing of some opinions is really long-winded, making people have no desire to read further, and it is constantly sensationalizing. Can't see the point at all

Are people like Gu Yanwu really loyal?

When I read the first sentence, I knew I couldn't survive.

Let's write about binary love

Why can't we do without a slap in the face?