Realizing She Misunderstood The Villain, The Heroine Begs For Forgiveness

The writing is good, but the story intervals are not grasped well. You finish writing one story, and the reader has just put down his mind and plans to watch the daily interactions of the characters after the story. As a result, you start a new character story in the next second. This is really boring.

1. I just subscribed to more than 100 chapters. I found that only the plot of the first female protagonist is sad enough, and the second and third ones cannot be included. First of all, the first male protagonist loves to cry too much. I feel that the expression of strength is more touching. He cries when he is a little wronged. It is too girly, especially because it is his own script. Secondly, why does Yu Linger keep having a guest role? I have already conquered it. When entering the plot, it feels like a joke, and the style is not rigorous. The plot of the third fox heroine seems to be the plot of the magic reform Liancheng Jue, but the original plot is not touching but just aggrieved. I feel that the author has taken the wrong direction.

You can add more points daily, don't do it one after another.

You can't hide it if you think about it out of context.

This book is extremely poisonous. How should I put it? The main character is directly transformed into the Virgin Mary.

This is the first time I read a cool article. I cried and laughed sometimes.

I have finished reading all the current chapters. I hope you can learn a little bit about the daily life of the protagonist and the harem. It is best not to start another story line just after telling one story line.

I don't know if I can finish writing and save 1 million coins first.

Good guy, after every heroine's misunderstanding is solved, the next one will come out immediately. You can't write a few more pictures in the next one.

Author, I'm just curious about what game you are playing.