Genshin Impact: Life Simulator, I Make Lumine Cry from the Start

I agree with the author's view of the world. If Mondstadt can be walked in ten minutes, is it called a city? That is the extremely simplified Mondstadt. After all, a city cannot have only a few taverns, one blacksmith family, and dozens of West Wind Knights. After all, a city has a population of at least one million, and the surrounding villages have a few scattered families in the game. Can these be called villages? Isn't this called a ghost village? Moreover, the area of ​​the village is too small, it must be at least hundreds of times larger. Moreover, according to Teyvat's rule, all things dissolve in water. This can be considered a game at best. Have you ever seen a Qiuqiu man swimming? Have you ever seen a Qiuqiu disciple holding an axe and swimming backstroke? Have you ever seen an Abyss mage swimming happily in the water after the shield is broken? Have you ever seen Mu Dunjiujiu riding the waves in the water? I have seen King Qiuqiu, who couldn't defeat anyone, so he just dropped his ruler and evacuated the battlefield at an extremely fast speed. Um

The person who should have been cleared the most was not cleared. How could Dadalia be cleared just because he was nice to his younger brothers and sisters? Can a person who burned his life for the country still be clean? Even the collapse of the country has been cleared, why? People with double standards are saying that when you like a woman, your three senses follow your facial features. Then why do you think Dadalia and Guobeng have personal charm? Isn't it because the lady slapped Wendy? The lady just hated Wendy in her heart for not doing things, and wasn't that slap because of Wendy's bad mouth? The lady doesn't owe Wendy anything. You can't blame Wendy, but Wendy definitely has the responsibility to do her job in her position. You can't say that she has no responsibility since she was worn out and fell asleep. Moreover, it wasn't just one person who died, so many people sacrificed their lives. How can you say that she has no responsibility at all? So it's okay for a lady to hate Wendy. His death was unclear. His IQ had always been online before, but in the end his character completely collapsed, and he was forced to go offline without any prelude.

The hair knife did a good job, don't do it again next time.

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The immortals have a contract with Zhongli, and what he cares about most is the contract. He can't break it even if he pretends to be dead. Therefore, if the immortals feel that the contract is still there, they won't think that Zhongli is really dead. Personally, I think the immortals may be cooperating with Zhongli in acting. Of course, there is also the possibility that care will lead to chaos. But Gan Yu feels like an alien everywhere, and can only escape by turning into a workaholic through the contract with Zhongli. If he calms down a little, he can realize that the contract is still in his mind.

It doesn't feel any more exciting. I'm lucky enough to have witnessed the true nature of the emperor...

Why do I look at Rhythm as if he wants to take away Zhongli and Wendy?

The protagonist is always alone during the simulation. Although there is a "dream", it always feels like a dream. You can get additional templates and use the combination of additional templates to generate characters, which can be used as heroines, villains, supporting roles, etc. You can even allow additional characters to travel through time in advance. It not only increases the fun and variety, but also allows people like the Seven Gods to have a deeper sense of reality. After all, a "dream" can be explained by coincidence. It just feels weird if it stays like this. Add some additional templates to generate other characters. It's okay to give people more ideas. For example: by adding a template to synthesize a different Rock God, let her replace Zhongli. When he fell into a dream, the other six gods entered, but Zhongli did not go. This will make Liushen feel strange. Or put together a Teyvat board "Fuhua Shangxian" to be with the protagonist. This can break the uniqueness of the protagonist and satisfy the pursuit of female character templates.

The whole story is relatively smooth, but the emotional lines are still relatively green. The writing style needs to be improved, and the length control is okay. The most exciting parts of the whole story are the Dao Wife chapter and the Liyue chapter. I have a good grasp of the original template and there are no mistakes. Unfortunately, the Mond chapter is a bit watered down. Basically, the more you write, the better. , I am working hard in the future. The previous ones, including Yula, Amber, and Keli, were all passed by. The snow-capped mountains are also very poor. The plot line of the lady is also written at the highest rate. The information is quite sufficient, but the characters are not full enough. From the current point of view of the book, the big plot can be read. Except for Yun Jin, the emotional line is fuller, and everything else needs to be improved.

After reading Chapter 12, it seems that the protagonist's growth talent is extremely limited. The entry is too weak. The golden talent has been developed for so long and was cut off by the God of Thunder. What about the existence above the God of Thunder? At least Zhongli is stronger than her among the seven rulers of the world. Zhongli has heavenly principles above him. His name is quite bluffing. He can do anything for you, but in the end he still accomplishes nothing. The author said that Otto is a low-profile character who barely has self-awareness, but the protagonist does not have Otto's wisdom or strength. It can be said to be a low-profile version of the youth version.