Wuxia: Creating a Fantastical Version of Star-Shifting from the Start

You said, if you want to have sex with Huang Rong, go for it. If you don't want to, just be generous. You keep holding on to a few ideas. This makes you feel like you are secretly filming someone with a photo and forcing them to do it. This protagonist is not as good as Murong Fu in the original work. This kind of character is like several people writing this book together, as if each person writes a chapter, without an outline.

The plug-in writing is very good, and it can be improved tenfold and several times at every turn. But I think that the martial arts in the original Murong, who only wants to return to traditional Chinese culture, are also complicated, and his strength is first-rate. But the protagonist of your novel looks so good, and his martial arts is also not complicated, but why does it feel that his strength is not as strong as Murong in the original work? His strength is too slow. Murong Fu's talent is very bad, but you can improve your understanding tenfold and several times at every turn, but why is the improvement still so slow? It's outrageous. If you want to suppress your strength, don't write that cheat. If you write it and suppress it, it won't work.

To be honest... When I watched it back then, I thought Qiao Feng was the most pitiful... The best start and the worst ending... Time has changed... Now I find that Murong Fu is the most pitiful one in Tianlong... My father has not been around since I was a child... I was forced by my mother to become a noble son who wants to restore the country... Good It's not easy to practice Star Shift... And gain such a great reputation... But then meet Duan Yu, who is hanging on the wall... And get implicated by his father... In the end, he will be ruined and betrayed by his family... A life worse than death, he will go crazy... Abi is the best heroine... She will stay with him from the beginning to the end...

Funny? It's been so long. The day after tomorrow, you are still at the lowest level. The divisions of your realms are still acquired, innate, supreme, master, great master, and heavenly being. While other people's realms are not classified as first-rate, third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, acquired, innate, master, or heavenly being, Murong Fu's supporting roles are at least in the late innate stage. Is your protagonist Murong Fu the day after tomorrow? Or at the lowest level, do you want to be like a third-rate master in someone else's book?

Don't always think about other people's martial arts. As awesome as your superpowers are, create your own.

I thought of a route, go to the ancient tomb to find the soul-moving technique of the Nine Yin Scriptures, go to the court to donate money to officials, the soul-moving technique affects the judgment of superiors, and I can rise to the point where I can see the emperor, and then learn from Dong Zhuo or Cao Cao, and soon I can use disguise to become the emperor, and directly change people. If I can become Li Yanzong through disguise, why can't I become the emperor directly?

I don't want to watch it after seeing the Wuliang Sword Sect destroyed. It's not that the Holy Mother doesn't like the protagonist who kills decisively. It's just that I don't like this kind of killing of the weak. Especially because the Ming Cult forces let Zhang Wuji go before, there is a feeling of bullying the weak and fearing the strong.

If you see the wife Huang Rong, you don't need to read it. In the content about Tianlong, Huang Rong also has a wife. He likes wives more than the author. It's too dramatic.

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I feel the writing is very good. It's a pity that Huang Rong is married. Guo Fu has grown up and doesn't like married women very much. I don't know if the author will let the protagonist take her in later. However, Xiao Longnu can be saved. Don't follow Yang Guo. I feel that the tragedy of Xiao Longnu was brought by Yang Guo. Maybe if she hadn't met Yang Guo, Xiao Longnu would not have been tainted.