Fantasy: on the First Day of Breaking Off the Engagement, You Will Be Rewarded with the Supreme Bone!

Cunhu can build walls by himself, so he doesn't need the company's materials at all.

Maybe the author thinks that his writing is very good... I can only say that he is another self-satisfied author. Ye Cangxue, as a hate-mongering character in the introduction, would definitely end up being crushed to death. I understand that the author wants to write a different heroine... But if this is the case, he should have written foreshadowing in advance and tried his best to win Ye Cangxue's favor. As a result, the readers' hatred was aroused, and they were all washed away... The author may think that his design is very special, but the readers will only feel disgusted and aggrieved. Moreover, I really had to make up my mind to clear my name and respect the author as a man, but ended up with such a poor result... I can only say that it is a pity for a pretty good book...

It's not pleasant to watch at all. A woman who is not even grateful to her savior still has so many people kneeling down to lick her? Even if you don't get married, is it necessary to be so humiliated?

I, Shuhuang, will hand over your good books.

No matter what force recruits a disciple, they won't want a white-eyed wolf, right? The protagonist treats her so well and ends up stabbing the protagonist in the back, which is widely known. Who would train such a woman?

According to what you wrote, isn't Ye Cangxue more talented than Qiu Ruohan? A reincarnation of an empress cannot compare to a person who relies on other people's blood. Moreover, you are saying that she is the heroine of destiny, how can she be so cruel?

Why do so many people now have preconceived notions that first-class merit can only be obtained by dying?

穹银发，纱雾白发，觉得桐乃换白好点，在说玩游戏怎么能没有白，白也是白发，

The fox demon wrote it, Ultraman wrote about him, Fantasy writing about him

The introduction said that Ye broke up with the protagonist for the sake of cultivating Taoism. When I entered it, I found out that she thought that some holy son was worthy of her, so she chose to break off the engagement. In addition, the breakup plot was described without any context. After only two chapters, my radar alerted me and stopped me from reading.

We have already reached the point where double pupils are already invincible, so why bother borrowing the tricks of other people's bones? Why bother writing about the Supreme Bones?

This writing is messy and extremely inconsistent! So speechless!

The story about Ye Cangxue's twist was whitewashed but dead. The author thought he wrote it well, but didn't know it was terrible. It's a waste of subscription!

Let me ask you, PDD's live broadcast seems to be quite long, right? ! I won't say too much. Is it necessary to have four or five hours? I have written more than 300 chapters, and it's time to stop. Also, the repetition rate of those barrages is still a bit high! It's always like "I want to blow this song", or "I'm going to cry to death", or "Wow, this song is so classic", etc. I hope I can pay more attention to it in the future.

What you don't get is licking, but what you get is pampering. If you get pampered, you get used to it. Although it would be sweet to have a good writing style, many people don't know how to write it.

Isn't the protagonist the one whose engagement was broken off? Aren't you a proper protagonist template? Where is the cannon fodder male partner? Look at Xiao Yan

Any villain, as long as he has good qualifications, can rise to the top immediately, with endless resources and a lot of backers! On the other hand, the protagonist, even if his qualifications are incredible, is said to be unable to plan his route for fear of affecting his development. In the end, the villain is not much worse than the protagonist. Isn't this nonsense?

I think it's better not to be Luo Hao's younger brother.

A veteran who can describe the cannon fodder realm as a feeling of sanctification. It not only describes the realm, but also describes the inner drama of the NPC. Mutual surprise. Compliment each other. Write about every drop of water in the ocean. In this way, the author can write a chapter with a maximum of one hundred words. If it really doesn't work, you can bring this matter up again in the next chapter and find a few NPCs to compliment each other. I can still write two more chapters. In line with the belief that if you have no shame, I will have no shame. The content of the story is not as important as the number of words.

How short it is to go up the mountain to meet the elders in just a few steps. You can't fly even after reaching the Xuandan realm. Sword cultivators don't have sword control skills, so they have to run. A few miles away from the chief mountain is another chief mountain. How small is the world you envision? I still need to practice writing like this, so I advise you to stop writing.

A five-color dragon whose name I can't pronounce. If you think it can get out of the dragon clan's territory, it's not as good as a sub-dragon.

? ? ? Lubbock often peeks at the night-raiding girl taking a shower? There is a big plain above the protagonist's head

Cousin and cousin, no matter how senior they are, the older one is the elder brother, right? Do you still want us to teach you this? One chapter is shocking at every turn and I wish I could write about it all. Isn't it interesting to write it? !

After just reading a few chapters, I realized that the author is a talented person. What a fucking talent. How did you arrange Soul Sword, Dark Sky, Hell-Blooded Demon God, and Soul Eater together? I just want to ask the author, has he ever played dungeons? ? A job transfer with Trinity? ? Also, Huang Jie just fell asleep? ? Are you kidding me?

The logistics department is such an important place, but it's as casual as a public toilet.

Over 800,000 words and over 500 chapters is really outrageous, right?

Finally there is a novel by Meng Hua Lu, please come on, author

If one can become a Jonin once the energy attribute exceeds 100, Uzumaki and Senju will be so awesome...

Anyone in Dragon Ball can abuse Pirates and Naruto. The world of Dragon Ball is several levels higher than Pirates and Naruto. They are all ball destroyers. How can Pirates destroy islands and Naruto destroy villages? If Wukong opens the eight gates, I'm afraid you're going to laugh to death.

Time ability is a failure, too confusing