
The Grand Line: The Way of the Gun Devil!
伟大航路:枪魔之道!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 87k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
48Chapters
1.2MReads
3.7kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 6
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Is your gun serious?
As in the title, it's a real gun. It's a real gun.
The idea is good, but the writing is still lacking. You obviously can't control this kind of protagonist yet. The protagonist shouts a high-pitched line to everyone he meets, but there is not enough preparation in the character's lines and interactive drama, giving people the feeling of Zhao Kuo who just shouts slogans in vain. Nowadays, there are too many restrictions on book reviews, and a lot of things cannot be published. The most practical suggestion is to refer to the tutor Ge Ming next door.
The first two chapters of the game are completely gone.
Has anyone read this book? Squeak, if there is no one, and the results are not very good, the author is a newbie and can hardly bear it...
The writing is good. Looking at the whole Feilu, it is considered to be excellent. I hope to keep up the good work.