Being Kicked Out of the Trap by Zhao Gao, I Formed Xiao!

直接灵魂网络覆盖全球不就好了??写的那么费劲吧啦的，越来越别扭

Drive out of the snare? ? ? What are you thinking about? You are no longer needed and 99% of the time you will be silenced.

It's so boring. Ninety-nine percent of what I write about Qin has something to do with the First Emperor. If it doesn't matter, I won't write about it.

After reading only a few chapters, I can already tell that the protagonist has the same thoughts as Yi Xiaochuan.

I really just write whatever comes to my mind. One moment I will tell you about the Supreme Bone, and the other a little baby will come and tell the First Emperor that Fusu has not ascended the throne. You don't have an outline, right?

The protagonist is 100% the son of the First Emperor and the Summer House Girl

Each of these fan protagonists is more useless than the other, and each one is more useless than the other.

It's so embarrassing that you're a hundred times better now and then without.

I'm not belittling national comics and elevating Japanese comics. Isn't it Kisame and Genie's sure win? What can Gai Nie do if he escapes from the water? What about Weasel and Kaleidoscope? What about illusions? I wonder if Qin Shi's illusion skills can't compare to Itachi's, right? If nothing else, the protagonist is Obito's ability, right? What about ninjutsu? When a huge fire ball goes down, except for a few people, who can set fire, and who is very strong in setting up nets, just Deidara himself, who can only set up nets

Post it again, whatever the hell you wrote, find a factory.

The plot looks very embarrassing. Naruto's ability system is obviously much better than that of Qin Shi, but it is significantly weakened here. Kamui's ability is invincible in Naruto, but he has been abused by so many people here. The descriptions of other organizational personnel are even more embarrassing. The most embarrassing thing is that he starts stupidly, and joins the trap like Bi. Is this the path that a golden finger should take? There was a golden finger at the beginning and he took the initiative to have sex with Zhao Gao. He felt aggrieved after being betrayed. Oh my god, this protagonist was written like a baby.

What the hell are you writing? Don't you know ninjutsu? What is written here that I don't want to read?

After you were so strong Itachi, didn't Madara Obito Kaguya explode the universe in a matter of seconds? ? ?

Whether it is directly related to a person or not, just look at who the Heavenly Master of Longhu Mountain is. .

Author, should your Sharingan have all the Sharingan abilities? I think the original version is not enough in the comic world and needs to be strengthened.

Why don't you live in seclusion in the mountains and forests?

That's it? Is it also suitable to be paired with the Akatsuki Organization?

It's well written but updates are too slow.

特么的作者是脑子有坑么？按照历史算，秦始皇开始统一六国的时候就26、27、28岁的。然后你特么开局说了花了一年的时间统一了六国。 秦二世是20岁的时候登基的，基本上也就是这小说开局的时候，也就是刚出生的样子。也是人才。刚出生就能馋女人了？牛叉了。 然后就是你特么苟了20年，是秦始皇的儿子，你二十岁的时候，秦始皇特么的还不到三十岁。你特么你确定你不是吕不韦给秦始皇留的种？ 人才作者。 秦始皇就活了49岁。你特么不要乱写啊。

Wen Yifan, Lin Luoxue, Ye Ruting, Wang Ying, Tao Hao

You only have four skills. Under normal circumstances, the skill pool should be very deep. Even if you have four competitive skills, you have to improvise during the game. When making choices, if you really have four skills, I will

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