
Original God: the Wine Sword Immortal of the Ningguang Family
原神:凝光家的酒剑仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 480k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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4.1MReads
161.3kFlowers
10.0 · 8.7kScore
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Worth Reading, Genshin Impact Fanfic, No Harem
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Worth Reading, Genshin Impact Fanfic
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Feilu Novels, a Collection of Interesting Humanities Genres,
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No, what you are writing is not the Jiu Sword Immortal. This is a pure Jiu Mengzi. The Jiu Sword Immortal is the master of the world of freedom and freedom, and he does not just drink for the sake of drinking. Don't forget that people are happy with wine, and I will be happy without wine. I laugh and scold people who care about the injustices in the world. What you are writing is a pure Jiu Mengzi.
There's no need to keep a low profile! Say nothing to the people around you. Drink every day. Even if you are close to someone for a long time, you will still hate it. The Jiujianxian is named Jiu, so he doesn't rely on drinking to improve his strength.
The writing is good, and the writing style and plot flow are both top-notch in today's Feilu. However, the introduction is seriously inconsistent with the content, and it can even be said to be a scam. If you came here for the introduction, it is recommended not to read it to avoid being raped. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is too sunny, and has basically reached the level of a holy mother. If you like to see yourself as someone else, you can leave. In the end, the protagonist's strength improves extremely slowly. If you want to achieve what is described in the introduction, If the author doesn't consider accelerating the progress, it will be less than 300 or 400 chapters. And currently, the protagonist has been struggling. The trials from genin to chuunin are all handled by the female protagonist. It can be said that it is not fun at all. Friends who can accept the above shortcomings I mentioned can continue reading. I believe this novel will not disappoint you. I am also waiting and watching. I hope the author can speed up the progress and improve the character of the protagonist. I will not say that he is a treacherous person, but at least it is ambiguous.
Aren't they all drunkards and swordsmen? Your drunkardswordsman is a drunkard. That's the author with cerebral palsy.
Immortals are immortals, and immortals are their essence. Why add so many words? It's boring to write your own book and follow the trend...
There is a sake sword fairy from the Inazuma Kamisato family, and there is a sake sword fairy from Liyue Ningguang, but is there a wine sword fairy from Meng Qin?
Although I like watching the Genshin Impact series, the protagonist's name and the fit with the plot make me uncomfortable. Su Chang'an? Are you sure you're not showing off?
Is this book no longer updated? Both books can't be updated, and they have to open up new pits. If you have time to open up new pits, it's better to finish the book you've already started in peace of mind.
I really *vomited* during the Ning Guang episode.
The setting is very interesting. Among the several daily books that include evil gods or SCPs, this one is my favorite. There is no invincible character in the first appearance, and it does not develop very fast. It is also related to the boss in the early stage. This is a normal world, otherwise it is just playing games and changing maps. Mainly The villainous character who is mostly rational and has a bit of humanity is quite enjoyable to watch, but I think it will be difficult to write in the later stages. If the subsequent characters are too weak and can't keep up with the protagonist, there is no need to write them unless they have some special abilities. If they can keep up, the protagonist will rise too slowly.
The restrictions in this book are extremely serious. Are there only a few soldiers to call the Invincible Red Alert? Ten times the number of people doesn't deserve to be called a society, let alone a red alert. One hundred thousand points can be exchanged for one thousand points, and three hundred thousand points can be turned into three hundred points. It's a mess.
Why are all the novels now written about the Jiu Sword Immortal as an alcoholic? . .
Just finish this book with 600,000 words? You've made me a little bit reluctant to watch...
This book made me cry a little bit
Can you tell me who the heroine is?
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