Pokemon: I Created Team Rocket

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It's best not to write this kind of plot where your life is in danger and you fight back at the critical moment. Your writing may feel very passionate, but I think it's a bit embarrassing. You are obviously writing the behind-the-scenes boss genre. Have you ever seen anyone in such a life-or-death crisis? Which one doesn't have trump cards one after another and everything is under control?

The combat power of the mythical beast is too weak. The World Tree is also the original tree after all, so how could it be so weak? It is outrageous that Nazi can control the dream sacrifice for a short time. How could Nazi be able to suppress the dream of countless years? The same is true for the three holy pillars. If you can't beat the king of practice, can you still be a guardian?

It feels like the protagonist is always fighting at a higher level than the protagonist, and any villain is higher than the protagonist. You are not writing a fantasy novel, where you are jumping up and killing every day. What you want to write is a protagonist like Itaki, and you are not writing a protagonist like Chi. He is constantly being seriously injured, and the heroine is not obvious. The author may be confused when he writes it.

Then he pointed at the protagonist and said, you are the future world champion, and only you can stop Team Rocket, which is very interesting.

I also started to label the harem, and deceived people who were looking at the harem, but I didn't write about it. Isn't this looking for scolding? Also, wouldn't it be good to have a die-hard setting for the character you summoned? You don't think the protagonist you wrote is very attractive, do you?

The label is harem, but now the author is not a harem. Fortunately, I read half of it and thought about reading the comments. It really disgusted me. No wonder the results are not good and such label fraud makes me vomit.

Write more about the development of the Rockets. There is no need for that campus game.

I feel that the author made those mythical beasts a bit weak. I won't complain about the level of the two gods of time and space, but Mew and the three divine pillars were defeated by a bunch of minions?

Is Dialga only level 75?