Comprehensive Comic: I Met My Son Next Door and Was Picked up by Qiong and Brought Home

The sea is full of water, full of various ideological activities. I keep looking at the interface, skills, and weapons, and then I just analyze it. There are dozens of chapters, but the total useful content is less than one chapter.

Why are you thinking about this? There are too many words, and there are too many inner thoughts. Eighty tenths of a chapter are inner thoughts. There really isn't much plot.

If the situation in the title occurs, it is not the author's fault, because the author only adds refinement.

Is the protagonist too young to write? If a woman is so seductive, is she a man? Qiong has always wanted it, but there is nothing to take advantage of. Is it impotence, is it too young? I really don't understand, who are you pretending to be a gentleman?

Is there something wrong with Chapter 4 or 5 of casually breaking things? If you go up and finish it with one knife, just drag it there. The protagonist's combat power is also inexplicable. He has tens of millions of points and does not strengthen himself. He has 20,000 points of mystery, but he actually thinks that accumulating points will increase it faster. What is the logic of this? When you're fully strengthened, wouldn't it be faster to go up and slash the evil gods one by one than to kill the mobs? Who are you fooling by forcibly suppressing the combat power for such a non-intelligent reason? How can you write an outline so that the protagonist's combat power can be as good as a pretender? From no ability to explosiveness in one hundred chapters, and no change in another hundred chapters?

Absolutely, I won't mention the two or three panels that appear in one chapter. Even the introduction of an item has to be written several times.

Narration is like tap water

To be honest, this book is quite interesting, but the author is too watery. There are a lot of psychological descriptions and speculations, and there are many theories, so I can write several chapters from getting up to leaving the house. After reading one hundred and fifty chapters, the general content is from Qian's acquaintance, meeting Miko, to meeting Yukinoshita at school, then solving the problem of Yukinoshita's evil spirits, expelling the spirit agency, and leading Shuchiin and Eiriri's mission to remove the strange water. Normally compressed content is almost 100 pages, and the rest is all Suita's ink.

Could you please refer to the characteristics of the era when writing a book, and why do you blatantly hug and kiss me? Do you think you can't die quickly enough?

You said you just write novels when you write novels? What are you pretending to be there? Can't you just do whatever you want? You have to pretend here. Let's say you are the king of biking, but you are not the king of biking, you are just a loser. I thought about this in my mind, but didn't dare to move in actual action, knowing that it would be bumping back and forth. What more education? Education is shit.

As a seventh-level engineer, as long as you talk to the factory, the factory can deal with them all. Although they cannot be fired, they can be transferred from their posts.

This disease is really annoying. It has been tormenting me from the 22nd to the 8th, which is close to 20 days. I really don't know how other people spend seven days. I am extremely envious. Maybe I'm too weak, that's why I'm having such trouble. The personal test of this thing is to attack the areas of your body that you are tired of and have problems with. For example, I have cervical spondylosis caused by writing, so I have been suffering from headaches and tinnitus, which is like eating mushrooms from Yunnan. My mother works all the time, so she doesn't feel well all over. The most important thing is that medicine is not available. Antipyretics are really not available. I don't know what people who stock up on boxes of medicine are thinking. There are no medicines, and some medicines are expensive and cannot be bought, so I have to fight hard... As time goes by, the trachea becomes inflamed, which is difficult to heal. It is not cured now. I am still coughing, afraid of cold, have headaches, sensory nerves are also damaged, walking is erratic, and my eyesight is also greatly damaged. In addition, as far as what I wrote yesterday is concerned, I can't do it as smoothly as before, and I can't stay calm all the time. It's like a big setback in all aspects. I hope I can recover soon and I hope everyone is well.

You, the author, like the shark-armed author from the x era who likes to hang people up. The shark-armed author from the Dragon Age said that you can't lose your virginity before the Dragon King, otherwise it may have some impact. I won't say the specific impact. Anyway, you hang people first, and then the finale ends directly with the Dragon King. Ju Nitian, and your book starts with finding various reasons for rejection, and also emphasizes that it has been rejected several times, and that it will wait until Qiong's psychological problem is better. Please, you like writing emotional dramas so much, why are you wasting your time, and the plot is so slow, how long will it take to wait? I doubt you'll be able to accept even one of the hundreds, so I'm speechless.

This book is really bad. At least half of one chapter is nonsense. **The chapter is just good for you. You are paid and you are so bad. **

I have read a lot of watery books, but most of them seem watery because they have little substance and the plot moves quickly. But this book is different. The plot is not bad, but various explanations and irrelevant little things are explained repeatedly, and then you can tell that you are in the water at a glance, which is very annoying. The writing is obviously good, but there are some places that kill your passion for reading.

It's very clumsy and verbose, with a lot of psychological descriptions. More than half of the plot is psychological descriptions. The author is great, can't you have less psychological activities?

There are so many things going on in my mind. I have written dozens of pictures but still haven't gotten into the theme. It's so hard to read.

I write so much about underwear, why is it that the author is a bt?

The title is so unbelievable that one psychological description is half a chapter. If it happens once in a while, forget it. If you do it every day, I won't even be able to read it. It's a waste of my time to do it for nothing.

Could it be that Yinglili and Shiyu-senpai were eaten by ghosts?

As long as you can keep writing, you will definitely pursue it, otherwise you will be afraid of getting in.

Didn't you say you want to upgrade to scan the QR code to become an immortal? I already have three points of strength including fists, palms and legs, but I still extract a bunch of martial arts indiscriminately. The side effect of scanning the code is to reduce my intelligence, right?

The more I fight, the more I get scared.

The heroine can Huo Xiuxiu, Ning Yin Nanfeng

But definitely don't have Song Qian and Tong Wenjie, Zeng Li's Wu Meiyin is fine.

Fellow Taoist, please stay. Do you want to have fun before going to Zhenhaiyan?

Of all the people who have written about Siheyuan, your book is the most interesting. It made me laugh so hard. Haha, this book deserves attention.

Good writing, keep it up＾0＾~, it's best to update 10 times a day

Isn't China in the northern hemisphere?

Why is Tongtian again? Yuanshi is the one who really protects his shortcomings. I can do it too. If his disciples include the protagonist and Xuandu, they will definitely protect their shortcomings. Tongtian is nothing. His disciples died too many and he became anxious before he started to leave.