I Was Just Born, and I Signed In to the Great Snow Dragon Riders from the Start

What? One hundred chapters in, the male protagonist is less than a year old, and he's still playing!

I rarely write reviews, and I suggest the author pay attention to two issues. One is the protagonist's practice. You wrote that one Qi Power Pill = one thousand catties. You also said that the protagonist is extremely talented and has good exercises. In the end, you still have talent + exercises + Qi Power Pills = one thousand catties. The function of co-authoring the first two is perfect absorption??? If this is just the case, I can already see you taking drugs all the way. The second suggestion is that since the protagonist has power, it is best to develop on his own during the period when the protagonist is growing up, such as collecting treasures and skills for the protagonist, or establishing an intelligence system for the protagonist. This will be more realistic and can also make the protagonist higher in the later stage. Of course, it is just a suggestion. If you don't like it, don't criticize.

The protagonist kills a grandmaster at the beginning. There are many narrations, soliloquies, and inner dramas. There are too many. I am afraid that readers will not know and will be speechless.

The author reads to me: From today on, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, get sick, play games, or limit my word count. I will burst into code words, life and death, I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, resisting the cold flames, the light at dawn, I dedicate my life and glory to code words, tonight and every night

I think we can give the protagonist a suitable reason. For example, there is a powerful person who falls in love with the protagonist and accepts the protagonist as his successor. Then he specially trains these people for the protagonist. Anyway, there is a system, so just do it casually. As for why no one knows, it's not simple. Such a powerful master doesn't want anyone to find out, so he just sleeps with the protagonist. There is an older brother who feels that he is destined to the protagonist. He quietly comes over to take a look and confirm the eyes. I met the right person. It is set not long after the protagonist is born. In the future, a wave of people will show up to the protagonist and expose the protagonist's talent. The talent is there, and the backstage is there. The rest is smooth sailing to the top.

When will you expose your subordinates? Cover it up all day long. If you have something to cover up, just find a reason. Just say it was given by the master to protect you.

Too young, at least a teenager

You can write the timeline faster and don't make it look like one year old turns into a teenager. It's not necessary.

But I think there is no need to hide it. There must be a pattern and a high-end atmosphere. Genius is genius. You can slowly reveal your strength.

After reading the latest chapter I could read, I felt baffled.