I Am in Kaiwu, and My Drive Is so Impressive!
人在铠武，我的驱动器太争气了！
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- Completed
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- 299k Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
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- Faloo
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Your theme is collapse, and most readers come in because of this. Movies are just a way of describing it. Collapse is the prerequisite. In other words, if what you are writing is not about Honkai Impact but an ordinary movie article, the readers who are coming in now are obviously not from the same track, but a different group of people. But here comes the problem. The theme of Honkai Impact is the plot, which means it focuses on the plot related to Honkai Impact. But as said in the comment section, you can hardly describe the specific content of the movie. Not only that, there are too many routines in entertainment articles, such as hot searches to compete with awards traffic, etc. Not to mention that I have long been tired of reading these and there is nothing new. If you think about what you have written so far, does it feel at all inconsistent to change Alicia and others to ordinary names such as Su Qing? Can it be treated as an ordinary entertainment article? I can understand what you want to write, but the method must be corrected. What you have written for the time being gives the impression that it is just like an ordinary entertainment article, and the sense of excitement and expectation is not very good. It is recommended to read similar animation, entertainment or live broadcast articles to see what others focus on. I remember that there are several books about playing Honkai Impact games in the Honkai Impact world, which are very similar themes. I suggest you read them.
Is the world of the protagonist an ordinary daily manga? It is recommended to add a world with combat power, because if the protagonist is an ordinary human being, he cannot open a harem. If the human body is at the limit, he can only deal with three or five girls. There are many beauties in the manga, and the protagonist with an ordinary human physique is unable to open a harem. At least the protagonist must have extraordinary power to open a harem.
With so much money, wouldn't it be better to just feed the army of evil spirits and snatch her away?
The second simulation is almost over. The third simulation gives the protagonist two Golden talent: How about being easy-going and harmonious with the supreme divinity?
I'm pretty sure that the authors of the novels I read all have a background in pornography.
As the title says, he is the guy who defeated the Imperial Cavalry three times in the Kaiwu Theatrical Edition and made Wang Xiaoming doubt his life.
It would be better for the author to make the Dark Emperor Cavalry the main form and change all the belts into the Dark Emperor Cavalry Belt.
I can't understand it, it's a mess, what the hell is Chapter 2 about?
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