I Became the Villain in a Book

Wang Jie or Zhang Jie, sometimes Wang Jie, sometimes Zhang

It looks a little uncomfortable in sections

Commentary on the second chapter of "I Became the Villain in the Book" written by Sui Feng Xiaozhu, I want to save my wife and first meet Lin Aotian.

Commentary on Chapter 28 of "I Became the Villain in the Book" written by Suiwen Xiaozhu. The white-haired violent ape died and killed Lin Aotian.

The writing is good, but the main character is a bit too frivolous and needs to adapt to his situation as soon as possible.

The protagonist is too weak, Zhao Fugui must die. Nothing big can happen if you are not ruthless

Keep writing. Although the title of the book is not great, the introduction is not attractive, and the cover is mediocre, the plot and writing are still worth reading.