
Siheyuan: Starting from the Separation of the Family with He Yuyu
四合院:从带着何雨水分家开始
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- Completed
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- 4.6M Words
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- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Okay, don't rush me. The author is also a human being, not a machine. Aren't humans inferior to machines? Go to death!
A ten-year-old general? He is as unreliable as a ten-year-old general in real life. Why are you not a 5-year-old general?
To be honest, I feel like the author didn't write well enough. The main reason is that as one of the comments below said, a National Games game is not considered a National Games if no one dies. If someone dies, the author will definitely be criticized by the character. I don't know if the author realizes this problem halfway through writing. If I didn't realize it, I felt that I was probably trying to cut the rhythm of the book. And... There are only seven countries. The volume is too small and there is not much to see at all. It would be nice to write more about other countries that play a supporting role. It doesn't matter whether it's writing about real-life hawk sauce, foot pot chicken, etc., Or writing about other-world Chinese costumes in anime. Seven is too few. One more thing. That is to use the power of Lord Yin Yue to kill a mutated monster. This is simply like using a cannon to kill mosquitoes. Although it is a level A, it is not used like this, right? If you ask me, just use the power of Lord Yin Yue to plow the first dungeon from head to toe, and then clear the level at the speed of light.
Are there mothers and daughters? Or even a wife. Slippery.
Do you think the 100,000 people you redeemed will have mobile phones? You can buy a mobile phone for free with Pinduoduo. Even the cheapest mobile phone costs more than 100 million. How long does it take to win more than 100 million?
I'm not very familiar with armor. If you were to write about Emperor's Man, what would you write about? Are those armors summoning people, or is it that the emperor himself is in a higher dimension, and then he observes the lower realm and lowers his armor when he finds that there are any crises that the lower realm cannot resolve? This doesn't feel good... It's not as good as the setting of Shura's righteousness and evilness. The stronger the qi, the stronger the armor is in theory. Even if it can't be compared to the emperor, there are still many things that can be written. I don't know which of the Emperor's settings are real and which are just hype, but whether it's the armor summoner or the main body, it seems that it can only be from the Order camp, and Shura doesn't have this restriction. In the case of Ultraman, it would be Belial, Dark Luziel, or Zero. One has been the emperor of the universe and has done many big things. Just change the background. The other wants to let all life stay in the most beautiful moment. He has dreams, strength and determination. Although he was whipped several times later and Luchiel became paranoid, it was good at the beginning, but the story might have to be original. Then there is Cero, the kingly and passionate protagonist. He has experienced many big events and has a lot to write about. All he needs to do is delete the weak ones... Suddenly I remembered that Geed can do it too. He is even more of a protagonist than Cero and even has a harem. For the Cavaliers, just choose one of the most controversial ones.
TM's Fei Lu's novels are getting less and less readable. Basically, I read a novel for half an hour, look for a novel for several hours, and wait for the updated novel. TM's writing is getting worse and worse.
Can you write it in one sentence? You divided this sentence into three paragraphs. It really gives me a headache when I read it.
It's a bit painful to watch. Why is this plot so heart-wrenching?
They also separated the family. Anyway, after reading almost a hundred chapters, they still couldn't separate themselves. When they started to separate the family, they just made headlines.
There should be one Chen Yang who chose the Chinese God System. Other subsequent divine masters should not be able to choose, otherwise it would be too buggy.
主次不分!主世界你都一笔带过!甚至都不写了!直接转玄幻!
I've already paid for my monthly pass, but you still haven't updated it?
It's as wide as it is wide, but it's not bad.
Clear soup with little water... It's really a waste of time
Please, please, please update quickly.
Honkai is another name for disasters in MiHoYo's universe. It is not limited to the Herrscher's arrival, the Great Collapse, and natural disasters. The final chapter of the month makes it clear that the Herrscher's arrival in the Great Collapse is tampered with by extraterrestrial civilizations. If the Collapse occurs, there will only be normal natural disasters, such as earthquakes and tsunamis somewhere on a planet. It is not the Great Collapse and the Herrscher's arrival. Do you have the concept of Honkai? This is why Xingtetsu is called Honkai so far, but there is no Honkai energy, and the Herrscher is coming. Walter Yang traveled through the star gate and the imaginary tide. The collapse energy was firmly locked in the solar system by the imaginary tide. It is worth mentioning that only weaker creatures can travel through the star gate. Suo contains a large amount of energy and cannot travel through it, nor can it destroy the railway to the star dome that is forced to travel through it.
This is the royal palace, please write, and Suguha, when did you recognize each other, please come back, why are you repeating it?
The security department of a large factory with 10,000 people only has about ten people. Let alone the 1960s, there are more than ten people now.
Suddenly the painting style changes, a new world? What the hell?
What kind of ghost is the separation of families? Can a girl divide her brother's house? It's not allowed here anyway. Can we cut off the relationship and separate the family? Are you not worthy?
The writing is very good, hurry up and follow me. Come on, the author is great. I will give you flowers and review votes. Come on.
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