Demon Slayer: From the Start, I Got Ripple Breathing

The character settings are messy, the original work is adapted without respecting the original work, and some useless settings are randomly added to the characters. The logic is messed up. Just after time travel, even if you get the breathing method, you can immediately chop off the ghost's head. It's a bit inappropriate. It's not at all. The protagonist's inner reaction to seeing the ghost is written. By the tenth chapter, he can kick the wind pillar. It's really powerful, but I don't know why it is so powerful. The writing is messy, the language has no logic, and the preface does not match the follower. All in all... It's hard to put it into words. Don't use the writing style of junior high school students to write randomly, it will hurt your eyes.

I can't accept Zangetsu's big kitchen knife.

After seeing the introduction, I want to say that Wuxian has no reputation in the first place.

Will Tanjiro escape? Is your character written a little more like it?

As we all know, in the hands of Joseph Joestar, ripple and sprint are two skills

Brothers I hope you will write more comments about this book I will read every one of them After all, this is my first time writing a book I hope you can give me more opinions In order to help me improve my writing skills, thank you.

Brothers I hope you can give me more opinions After all, this is my first time writing a book I will read every one of your comments. I hope I can improve my writing skills in various ways Create better work

At least mark the chapter and write a title. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Commentary on the chapter "Demon Slayer, Get Ripple Breath at the Beginning" written by Baicai Yanxian. It turns out that I am a bastard.

Regarding "Demon Slayer, Get Ripple Breath at the Start" written by Baicai Yanxian, Chapter 7 Are you sure it's not the Sunflower Book? Chapter review.