Starting with The Warring States: The Righteous Thief

Yesterday I read the film review of the film, and I was a little confused. I wanted to find some fan fiction to read. I came across this one and clicked on a few pictures of the key plot. I felt that the writing was okay. I started watching it from the beginning today and subscribed to all of it. . . The rhythm in the early stage is okay, but it is a bit casual in some parts, and it gets a little bit more complicated later on. Inexplicably, hundreds of thousands of troops were mobilized in a year or two, and they were still commanded by remote control. There are other things like spies, intelligence agencies, business making money, etc., They all came too fast and developed in a flash. Obviously the plot follows the pace of the movie, but it only takes a year or two, especially after the capture of Nanjing, it takes at most a few months until the end of the movie. In this novel, you can make a lot of money by building a good relationship with the governor of water transportation. In fact, it takes more than a few months from the time you build a good relationship to the time when your first batch of freight has passed. The rebellion later became even more trivial. It was written as if it was a complete mess. Hundreds of thousands of well-trained soldiers were raised as soon as the banner was raised. Three provinces and six prefectures were captured in an instant, leaving the dragonfly vulnerable to a blow. . . The Guangzhou side is also very childish. They slap foreigners without giving them face, banning smoking and banning special privileges. On the one hand, you can buy unlimited guns and guns from foreigners, and the people in the intelligence department are as loyal and capable as robots. Alas, I feel that except for the three brothers, most of the characters in the book have become NPCs, with no emotions and no logic, and the purpose of existence is to be driven by the protagonist.

Don't tell me that the book is finished just like this

Ah!!! Why are you so appetizing! Ahhh, author, I want to read the follow-up.

Come on, the author, work hard to update, and I will give you all the flower evaluation votes.

On the one hand, according to the plot of the movie, it only took a few months from the capture of Jinling to the appointment of governor. Then in the past few months in the novel, rebellions have swept across the country. . . It took half a month to reach Liangjiang from Guangdong. On the one hand, he said that he would develop slowly in the next place he conquered. On the one hand, the troops are advancing at a rapid pace. Hey, I don't know if the author is illogical or too arrogant. The stall is too big, there are too many things I want to write, and I am eager to finish them in dozens of pictures. The boundaries between the macro narrative and the micro plot are unclear, and the rhythm is chaotic, which leads to this serious sense of fragmentation. It is a pity that the early writing and conception were lost.

I felt good in the early stage, so I paid 10 quick bucks to watch it, but I didn't expect it to be so bad later on. Oh, forget it, all the remaining points were rewarded.

Alas, the writing in the early stage was quite good, but in the middle stage it started to get more and more ridiculous. When it comes to the next dozen or so pictures, it's like a eunuch at the speed of light. . . I don't want to say much else, but the heroine's scene was so embarrassing, it made me pick my toes. It's really better to not have a heroine at all.

Commentary on Chapter 63: Jiang Wuyang Leaves Jinling in "The Heavens Begin with the Name Certificate" written by Er Ah.

Commentary on Chapter 15: Destruction of the City in "The Heavens Begin with the Voting of Names" written by Er Ah.

Commentary on the first chapter of "The Heavens Begin with the Voting of Names" written by Er Ah.