Martial Arts: Take the Dart at the Beginning and Get the Unparalleled Sword Box

The protagonist of this novel said that he should not get too close to Harry Potter to avoid being arranged by Deng, but as soon as he asked you to help, you had to build a memorial arch as a nanny. I was really drunk.

Have you watched episode 43? Jing He is so fucking pure, fuck me! I am really convinced that I still believe in DGP after being deceived. How could there be such a stupid person? Let your family die in a different way. What a beautiful job.

First of all, the setting that the protagonist cannot drink comes out of the blue without any foreshadowing, and the protagonist has no strong resistance. Of course, if he is forced to drink, he will be more poisonous. Secondly, this setting has no effect at present and will only irritate the readers. It may be foreshadowing, but at least in my opinion, it will take a long time to develop. It works, but the author's writing style obviously cannot support this kind of plot that is essentially rz. In the end, if you want to use this plot to have a protagonist to establish a contrasting image, it is indeed successful, because I only saw a completely different rz without any personality from the previous plot.

This book does not kneel down and lick Konoha. In the early stage, the protagonist is in Konoha. In the later stage, the protagonist will betray Konoha and join Akatsuki.

This introduction fully demonstrates the author's ignorance

Why do you want to create a heavenly list? Digging your own grave? .

What type of person does the main character have to do if he is 1.9 Meters tall? The moon boy Arthur is only 1.81 Meters tall.

Since I joined Loki Familia, I have no chance to meet Blue Ribbon. It's a pity because Blue Ribbon can't be with people from Loki Familia. I hope the author won't write nonsense.

I think the protagonist's Heaven-turning Palm can be integrated with other palm techniques, and if we continue to deduce it, maybe it can really turn the world around in the end. Although the Heaven-turning Palm is quite weak now, the name is domineering.

You are an escort, but you are not a good escort. Fuck around. You must be seriously ill!

Why do some conversations have no punctuation? Looks weird

It feels like it's a bit of a rundown. I personally suggest that you write some of the content in the work and some of the audience's performance and feelings, so as to make the content more substantial.

Does the protagonist's Flying Sword Technique include internal strength, light skill, and sword tactics? Can you explain it more clearly when introducing the exercises, otherwise it will feel very crude. And isn't this thing very important to understanding? Moreover, there is only one Peerless Sword Box, which cannot be widely used by the Lin family. Has the author considered getting a set of ancestral skills for the protagonist's family? It can be popularized, unlike Flying Sword Art which has the restriction of Wushuang Sword Box

Is the starting setting so speechless? It is said that the mixed martial arts world has made the strong stronger, but it has also lowered Lin Yuantu's strength? The protagonist, a third-rate chicken, is still in charge of the Sui Dynasty's escort agency? I don't even understand the realm of innateness. Is there a conflict in my mind? Is the protagonist a fool?

If you can't practice to the point of innateness, you can keep saying the word "water", and you can kill as many as you want as soon as you get the flying sword. **You haven't practiced anything and you are so awesome.

There is no such thing as 50-0 in tennis. The author doesn't understand tennis at first glance, and he has even read less of the original work.

你个扑街，今天的更新呢？？？？？？啊？说啊？

The ending is like a eunuch, digging so many holes but not filling them, and meeting so many heroines but not accepting them.

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Let me knock, is this a eunuch?