Flowers bloom in profusion, yet tears fall unbidden. Ten years of hard study, and at last comes the day of success. Parents hope their son will become a dragon. Like the mother of Mencius, they move three times and even smash the tofu shop, all in the hope that their daughter will succeed!
But fate takes a cruel turn, and the girl fails to live up to their hopes. The boy is too young to understand his parents' hardships. Only when he reaches middle age does he finally understand their hearts. Alas! With elders above and children below, marrying and having children too early, one wrong step leads to another, and night after night brings sleeplessness...
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to actual people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
Commentary on the first chapter of "Harley Quinn's Counterattack" written by Qilin Baobao.
Like you, I found some shortcomings but couldn't fix them. It seems that I will have to read it a few times before posting in the future and fix it before posting.
If you don't write an outline, the plot will be in an endless loop and you won't be able to get out of it, and then you'll be stuck there and won't be able to write anymore. If you have nothing to do, read more. No more talking, no more writing, go read.
There are many typos and the content is not smooth. I wanted to make some changes, but I found that I couldn't change it after I submitted it.