
Check-In: Starting with the Ultimate Series
签到:从终极系列开始
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- Completed
- Length
- 700k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Buddhists don't need women
You talk about getting rid of feudal superstition, how did your system come about?
To be honest, I don't feel any aesthetic fatigue towards Yukinoshita. I thought it was interesting before, but now I think it's really childish. I say I don't rely on the energy at home, but in fact I do. If she didn't rely on the energy of her family, she wouldn't be able to build the club, and she still thinks it's all her own achievement.
Doesn't Xiu know about the Yehenala family? I don't even know that this is the largest demonized family. You maintain the fucking order of time and space.
I just started reading it, it was a bit watery and I wrote a lot of useless things.
Tian Xin is worse than Hua Fulong from Ultimate 3
It's boring. I saved more than ten of them but haven't read them yet. I feel like there's no point in raising the level without thinking at the end. Also, I went to check it out and found that the strengthening stones were all out of the question, but they were still weak. Now I've only made the multi-dimensional ones so high, which is boring.
? The protagonist is assimilated like Neurosis, right? Is this the time traveler?
There are not many protagonists like this who are stupid. Since you know everything, you can make a lot of money by engaging in technology, finance and investment. But do this
I have a small opinion. Now the protagonist is in her 20s and is a teacher, and Lei Ting is only about eight years old. Even if Lei Ting goes to the Ultimate Class 10 years later, the protagonist will be in her 30s and Lei Ting is 18 years old. Isn't this a bit strange! ! (My own opinion. Just thinking)
This is obviously the result of my thinking, and there is no solution at all.
It's like the Dragon Subduing Palm can't compete with the Toad Kung Fu... But Ouyang Feng is also a weirdo. He has a Yang Finger for hundreds of years, and he has just practiced a martial art that is restrained by a Yang Finger. It's miraculous.
For example, which character you want to appear on the stage and do something interesting in the real world? You can mention it in the comment area, brainstorm ideas, crowdfund and write a book, hehehehe.
**Tang Bohu's painting sold for 200,000 haha
The angle is good, but the story is monotonous and the characters are not rich.
I can only say that it would be better to recite the original lines.
This most beautiful honey is that we are all creating chance encounters
I hope the heroines are Tan Jing and Chen Jia
You are great. You are good at giving gifts to girls. Not bad. I really like this kind of author. He is generous and generous. Not bad. Keep up the good work.
游戏数据本来就多还那么慢咋留人?
It seems to be ghostwritten, but I still have to say something. You can say anything about books, but you can't talk about Dream of Red Mansions, because Dream of Red Mansions is not a "book". This is something that all storytellers know.
One chapter probably has less than a thousand words. . . .
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