I Met a Fallen Angel from the Start, and She Was the Blackened Villainess

A cover is also mosaic, who do you look down on? We are all decent people.

This is suitable for free prostitution, you are so good at it, people will come to snatch your things, and look down on you. If the protagonist is not too open-minded, will the other party let the protagonist go if he wins? What a weak and incompetent protagonist.

You've ruined all the good themes. When writing a book, you have to distinguish the difference between the protagonist and the supporting role. The description of the first protagonist is incomplete (specifically, the character) The description of the second battle scene is too poor The third combat power is too high Fourth, you have to figure out who the protagonist is.

The pace is too slow, and there is foreshadowing at the beginning? Goldfinger is too watery. This is not 7 o'clock. This kind of slow pace is more enjoyable and less intensive, so no one will watch it. **

If you don't know how to write, then don't write. I thought you wrote well, but in the end, you wrote another princess. The outline is a mess. The protagonist should be the main character, with a few maids as assistants, and there should be no need to add women to the rest. Don't you understand this? You're writing blindly.

The protagonist insists on not finding anything unusual, and the heroine insists on hiding. She doesn't see the back, but the more she watches, the more uncomfortable she becomes. Wherever I look, I only know that the heroine goes out to cause trouble and grab some kind of trial tower. The protagonist has no idea at all, and then there are all kinds of hidings. This protagonist is really useless. Until now, she doesn't know what she is doing except practicing. She has no ambition and just wants to earn gold coins with some perfume. I am speechless. I don't know if I will watch it again, but at least I don't want to watch it now.

I have a friend who wants to know where the cover is from

I get annoyed when I see scenes of escaping from marriage, or the heroine having a fiancé.

Here are a few pictures. I just want to say something about the author. Since you set the background of Western fantasy, the sudden Chinese name is a bit inconsistent with the empire. It is best not to mention equality. Since you have a maid setting, the title of master is more enjoyable. Also, is this a hegemony novel? And you, with your low-to-medium qualifications, I'm thinking that the worst you can do is not be able to break through to the second level? The upper limit is obviously so high. The writing is also good, and the plot is pretty good.

I hope there won't be too much time before doing business!