Hong Kong Comprehensive Report: I, Inspector Hua, Set Rules for Hong Kong Island

Do you choose this kind of thing in the professional arena? To be honest, any ranged mage can pull it off* let alone a game**. Can you think about the logic before writing something? Have you played the game? Just pick any ball girl and you're not even qualified to get close to her.

Hello everyone~, I am Shen Nong, and I have been poisoned to death. This message is sent by the merits I saved with trillions of yuan. There was nothing serious about this kind of poison in the first thirty chapters~, but in the end, the potency of this poison increased exponentially, woohoo~ I couldn't bear it anymore, and passed away. I hope future generations will take warning~

Holy shit! Chapter 1 Are you going to commit incest? What's the difference between this and an animal?

It's outrageous. I'll jump directly to the Marvel plot later. This is all out of focus.

To be honest, with this power, I could directly rule the entire universe. Just use your strength to silence the weak. Survival of the fittest. Who doesn't want to be emperor?

Lei Luo was still a patrol officer in the 1960s? Who gave you the courage? Lei Luo was born in the 1920s, became a civilian in 1948, and became a chief detective in the 1960s.

The common people are always the common people. The more you write about it, the more it becomes more and more popular. Look at the history of that powerful man who exposed his children to the public prematurely. Aren't they afraid of premature death? Do they understand natural disasters and man-made disasters? ? ? ? The author's nouveau riche mentality

It's just nonsense at the beginning. Why don't you check the information carefully before writing it? The police academy graduation system task uniform policeman has to pay for it? In the 1960s and 1970s, no one was willing to go to the Hong Kong police. Uniformed police were the lowest level. People paid for detectives. Chinese detectives were equivalent to the level of sergeants. Chief detectives were equivalent to sergeants of Class A police stations. Chinese people in that era could only be assistants. Inspectors and above were all ghosts.

Is Ding Xie your father or something? He provokes you every day and refuses to kill him. I'm convinced.

What kind of thing is he writing about? He goes to rob a casino and gets 3,000 yuan. Others are robbing the rich and giving to the poor. Is there something wrong with the author's brain? Being a sign, and also an archway, it's heart-wrenching to see.

Is there a stronger family in Eagle Country than Rockefeller and Morgan in the United States? It was simply impossible after World War II

What kind of internal power does the protagonist have? He can charge it for several days and discharge it for an hour, but he can still practice martial arts.

Your timeline is really messed up... Forget about the time of the movie and TV series, the protagonist and Lei Luo have only been police officers for a few years and then they came out of the Independent Commission Against Corruption? It's like a game, except for the protagonist, time speeds up for everyone else?

It can only be said that the author's imagination is a bit small and he cares too much about the original work. You gave a plug-in without restraints, but wrote a protagonist who is restrained everywhere!

Third person for a while. A first-person monologue. It's very tiring to watch. Stop watching.

Actually accepted Xie Dajia? The taste of the protagonist is also strong enough

The era feels a bit chaotic, and many things that didn't exist in that era seem awkward. At least explain it! Also, if you don't speak Cantonese, don't write in a Cantonese tone as it will look awkward. For example, no policeman will call himself a policeman. He will only call himself a policeman or a policeman. Chalao is the same as a nickname. Under normal circumstances, you would just use your nickname when introducing yourself in front of others?

Author, you idiot. I don't have to say anything about fighting zombies, but what do the protagonist's soldiers do when fighting ghosts? The murderous aura condenses and the gods block the killing of the gods and Buddhas.

At that time, there were many guns in our village

After reading more than 90 chapters, I have a question. With 40 points of strength and 25 points of constitution, when a punch hits an object or a human body, will the strength be more than half of the constitution, causing the body to be unable to withstand the excessive force and injure itself? After all, it has counter-shock power

Those who want to see it are fine, but those who want money should not go in. You can't bring it in. Things that happened in the 1980s and 1990s are not written as things that happened in the 1960s, and the plot is forcefully inserted into the plot to irritate the eyes.

Fortunately, I fell in love with the [lead girl] who competed with Mrs. M for the directorship. There is also a little Luoli who has just inherited the count and is particularly attached to me. Her name is Laura. Gerber lost money again. He told me that if you are brave enough, just take the money from the gambling table. I thought about it and it seemed enough, so I took it while everyone was dumbfounded. Superintendent? I think I also have a work pass as a special adviser to the MI6 staff.

Author, if you let the protagonist write various classic novels in Xiangjiang, you don't need too much description, you can just skip it. You are giving the protagonist a father of various novel types, as well as various classic songs! The godfather of music~

If you don't change, we'll form a team of gay men and go to your house.

I came as soon as I saw my avatar.

Okay, okay, you will stop updating

When did the hundred yuan come out in the old days?

How about recovering more Vulcan Insects from the ruins? Few authors write that Vulcan Insects are obviously strong and rare.

The overall writing routine is good, and the growth is a little faster. In other words, the apprentice's growth could have more sources of strength and diversify it! A few more apprentices will make a good fanfic with more than a million words. You can use this method to write a knight fanfic.

Ycythis. . The writing is quite outrageous. . . This girl is pretty, I have to admit. . . But it shouldn't be to this extent, it's the same as Long Aotian's novel. . . .