
Laying Low in the Ninja World: My Bloodline Clone
苟在忍界:我的血脉分身
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
569Chapters
3.4MReads
15.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 35
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The introduction in the title is completely inconsistent with the content
After reading this, I don't understand why the protagonist repeatedly violates his bottom line in order to save the people of Konoha, and has no self-discipline at all? The character is more like a virgin (neutral word). The protagonist doesn't believe in self-centeredness (meaning not to harm one's own interests and help others), so why does he like to save others even if it is detrimental to himself?
In this book, I keep seeing the author write original characters, and the original characters are almost invisible. I almost thought it wasn't fan fiction.
The writing is okay, but at this pace, what are you writing?
I really don't understand you. Having a clone actually doesn't cause trouble. It would be better if you write a point-adding system.
What's the point of wearing Hokage's clothes? It's almost like another world when I write it.
To be honest, it was quite boring to write. The protagonist has over a hundred shadow-level clones and is completely capable of violently unifying the world, but in the end he is still plotting behind the scenes.
Did you write it without checking the information? How old is Aizen? You must know that when Aizen joined the Shinigami, Mako and the others were still there. There was a gap of several decades, and Aizen didn't care about his mother for so many years, right? If you look back at it, you will know that he has a younger brother. If you say that Aizen was a** at a young age, it doesn't make sense. Then how did the mother of this setting know about it?
The title of the book is "Naruto", but the result is that it is selling meat on the head of a sheep. I'm really excited, the pace is so slow, and I keep writing about daily life. I don't know what effect these plots have on the plot. The protagonist is just looking for trouble, and the dialogues between the characters in the book are all the same, which is too embarrassing. There are only a few characters in the original work, they are all my own creations, and the original characters have no characteristics at all! And the protagonist is a bit of a virgin, **.
In a book like this, the protagonist must be able to cause trouble, otherwise what's the point?