Check in and Become Luffy's Lieutenant

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No one who has any bottom line regarding Impel Down City would do this.

At the beginning, the protagonist was only given some useless skills. Giving three-color domineering power early would be more useful than anything else. Now the protagonist has died twice, and even the empress has been given away. I wonder what the author is thinking? Watching the fanfic is not only for fun, but more importantly, to make up for the regrets of the original work. Seeing that the protagonist has only replaced Zoro's position is not fresh at all.

It is really embarrassing to forcibly whitewash Lao Jiang. I won't go into details about the 280% split. I just hired people to collect intelligence. But what happened to the whitewash? The shady landlord rented out the house even though he knew there was a ghost, and continued to buy and rent out the haunted house. The contract was signed for two years. How shady.

Just want to know what is the definition of Shuangwen? Is there a difference between the reader's and the author's understanding of it? ? At least if you just follow the plot blindly and the protagonist is marginalized or does not have any effect on the plot, then there is no need to write a fanfic. You can just simplify it according to the comics or animations, and there is no need to add a time traveler protagonist. In fact, if it is well written, whether it accepts girls or not, it can still be read by people. It seems that shark eagle comedy novels have achieved this.

With the system, I have lived to be over 30 years old. And then there is no change at all?

Come clean and die clean, I have never seen the world, and I was ruthlessly laughed at by the author. . . If I write my own protagonist like this, I'm afraid I don't know what a hot-blooded immortal person is.

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