The Arrival of the Herrscher of Steel
钢之律者降临录
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- Ongoing
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- 3.9M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 11h ago
- Source
- Faloo
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To be honest, the first chapter alone is a bit overwhelming. This is similar to the first chapter of Zhezi, which is really not suitable for novels. At least, if you are not a master with a certain fan base, you may not be able to stand it. You have to get to the point at the beginning. This is the first point. The second point is that the character of the protagonist should not be directly stated, but should be reflected in actions. If you give him such a high evaluation at the beginning, it will be easy to find fault later. Thirdly, the part about arranging cheats in advance should be hidden. Reading novels is for pleasure, and pleasure requires at least a certain degree of self-control. The first chapter seems to arrange the fate of the protagonist. Just this feeling of involuntariness makes readers less interested in continuing to read. The above are purely personal opinions and can be regarded as suggestions. It's natural for the author to have his own ideas. You can delete these after reading them, so they won't affect the comment area.
If you don't choose the Immortal Sutra of Immortality, there will be no one else who chooses Xia Ke Xing
After watching it for a long time, I can only use two words to describe how beautiful it is.
Damn, it's just a fool's errand. You want others to give you a chance when you're the boss. You're mentally retarded and brainless.
After watching it for so many days, I finished it in one go
Personally, I feel that it would be better to write about the aborigines as a time-traveler without memories. The initial setting was that the protagonist himself proposed to destroy and redeem his regrets. However, the protagonist without memories wants to redeem something, and the sense of immersion has plummeted.
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Why does the author spend so much time describing a Dawn and Dusk Squad that only has two or three sentences of background description for the Ranger series of weapons in the game? If there was no opportunity for this team to appear later in the book, there would be no need to describe a few passers-by in such detail.
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