Chronicles of the Steel Herrscher
钢之律者降临录
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 4.0M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1.8kChapters
35MReads
52.8kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 47
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The intention is very good. I once had this idea and impulse to write a novel, but the realistic writing slapped me in the face. But the shortcomings are obvious. Various events are too deliberate, and the various motivations of the protagonist are too obvious. Although the readers are no longer troubled by the Riddler, the writing seems too pale. All in all, the novel is great, and it will be even better if you practice it systematically
The comment section is so deserted. . . Bring more people
Herrscher of Steel... Is the author playing Honken 2?
To be honest, the first chapter alone is a bit overwhelming. This is similar to the first chapter of Zhezi, which is really not suitable for novels. At least, if you are not a master with a certain fan base, you may not be able to stand it. You have to get to the point at the beginning. This is the first point. The second point is that the character of the protagonist should not be directly stated, but should be reflected in actions. If you give him such a high evaluation at the beginning, it will be easy to find fault later. Thirdly, the part about arranging cheats in advance should be hidden. Reading novels is for pleasure, and pleasure requires at least a certain degree of self-control. The first chapter seems to arrange the fate of the protagonist. Just this feeling of involuntariness makes readers less interested in continuing to read. The above are purely personal opinions and can be regarded as suggestions. It's natural for the author to have his own ideas. You can delete these after reading them without affecting the comment area.
What if the protagonist becomes the villain for some reason?
Did you experience amnesia after traveling through time? This is not fun to write
After watching it for a long time, I can only use two words to describe how beautiful it is.
Huh, I accidentally misunderstood the wrong version of the Stigma Project. It has been corrected now. The 16th edition is reversed from the first edition. The gatekeeper is an idiot.
Come on, author, think slowly, don't be in a hurry, I won't rush you anyway, I'll read it after I gain weight.
Book it all in one go, are you used to flying?! It's been a long time since I've seen slow-cooking fast food.