Prehistoric: Infinite Initiation to the Mythical Daluo at the Beginning

The thunder god Baalzebul is only as powerful as a general? If you look at the performance alone, One Piece's performance is really exaggerated compared to Genshin Impact. It feels like the current pirates' combat power will soon become the same as the Dragon Ball next door, and their combat power will collapse. Now one can defeat the Yonko alone. At first the Yonko were so proud, but then as soon as they met Luffy, they all felt as if they had suffered from cerebral congestion for ten years. When fighting big pirates and marines, they are all superb, but when fighting Luffy, they all become war criminals. I used to enjoy watching One Piece with all the ups and downs, but now I almost feel like One Punch Man.

It's hard to understand what the author was thinking. Summoning people in a big hotel didn't count just one Anna, but ten more people came. Is the big hotel you use as the killer's safe house a roadside motel? There were eleven more unknown killers who were not registered and appeared inexplicably. They didn't react at all and they were able to leave safely. Not to mention that all check-ins must be registered, the mere presence of unregistered strangers represents a possible security breach, which is enough for the hotel manager to take action.

Numb, the heroic spirits became mute. Crown position boxing, sudden stop of BGM, Fu Fu who barely appears in the scene

If the door cannot be opened, just tear down the wall

Iron Man defeats the Dark Fairy King. The author is a big fan of Iron Man!

I haven't finished writing the balloon yet. How long will it take to write? Can't we get new technology? Now that I see it, I have no desire to continue reading.

At this time, Germany wasn't even fighting Poland. How could there be any Soviet fighter pilots?

I can't hold on to the first chapter. After reading it, do you think it's well written? It's a lot of nonsense.

You can do some manipulation and fuse some of the original power of Dyna and Gauss with yourself, so that you don't have to combine them. Or let the protagonist get some special opportunities in the Collapse Universe and directly transform into Saka.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them and just start interacting with Asuka. Don't you feel embarrassed? What the hell, the descriptions of Keiko and Momo are too old-fashioned. It's quite like the imitation of the underworld deck book. The pure clown descriptions are annoying. I suggest you reduce them. Why don't you learn from the descriptions in Judai's book? It's quite normal.

Is it possible not to have a harem? Xiaozhi has traveled through time and is not a different person.

If you continue to cut it off like this, I will really have no choice but to raise it, and then read it after hundreds of thousands of words have been raised.

It's too funny to always use internet words

Low profile mythical Daluo? Da Luo True Immortal is equivalent to the Great Luo Golden Immortal?

** Combat power compressed 20 times is 211? Shouldn't it be **? I'm specifically here to read cool articles, not to gain wisdom. Leave,**

This is the first time I heard that Shinhwa Da Luo can be obtained through indoctrination. I'm afraid he's not a parallel import Da Luo.

Give Yaowen a little bit of the Zhenzhen Fruit

No one noticed this cover?

It is recommended that the protagonist's name be Yuding instead of Yang Qi. Why should he always use a name that only the protagonist knows? Isn't it better to just use the jade tripod?

Next time taking stock, can it be a complaint? The characters from Wanjie will definitely have wonderful expressions when they see the UP master of Station B complaining about them.

Your word count is too few. Please hurry up.

The story is good, but there are too many water characters!

Host, your express delivery (I love a piece of firewood) has been delivered, please pay attention to check it.

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