My Portable Space Begins in the Siheyuan

Once you understand prices, write a book. Every transaction is outrageous.

It's been over a hundred chapters, let alone getting married, and the engagement hasn't even started yet?

Don't write about martial arts and cultivating immortals, otherwise it will be useless

As the title says, I'm here to read the chronology. I like the author to focus on, for example, interpersonal interactions, the various social trends at that time, or you can write about intrigues or hobbies. Wouldn't it be good to write more about things that are close to life? Come and see your gang in the courtyard, martial arts, and immortality. The front is all set, but the back is really messed up

It was originally a good book, but later it became a fairy tale. This is a failure. There is no need at all, otherwise the results will be very good. The author's writing is good and the reading is relatively fluent. Character IQ online. His character is not a bastard style. The general environment of this kind of novel is at most ordinary martial arts and force. At most, just open the pig's feet and hang them.

I thought it was awkward to have sex. How could I have such a good impression after meeting for the first time? We even took off the disguise. It was just a transaction.

Well written, keep up the good work! Don't be as violent as others write, just live your own life.

I just can't figure it out. It's enough to write a fan fiction story and intersperse plots. Why do you have to marry a plot girl? She has a golden finger in the system and knows the future development. How good is Lou Xiao'e? Capital has systematic space. There are so many women in the city, why do they have to be involved with capitalists? The plot requires Xu Damao to report, but according to the plot, we know that Lou Bancheng is a big capitalist, with at least hundreds of thousands of people! So Xu Damao is just the trigger. Even if the big boss in the plot came forward to release the Lou family, he definitely negotiated unequal conditions. Silly Zhu does not have such a big face. As Xu Damao said, Silly Zhu is just a cook who serves people.

1. The author doesn't understand what it means to go too far 2. I don't know what daily life means, such as being a father. This is a written language that you basically don't use or see in your life. 3. Lack of knowledge about cameras. It's best not to write about things you don't understand, otherwise it will only add to the jokes.

The setting and pacing are pretty good. Farewell to the harem, farewell to the fantasy building. .