Seafaring: A Time House from the Start

Why are they all here to save Ace?

When I saw that Ace was being rescued by a licker, I immediately ran away.

In the early stage, Luffy was pretty good, as wise as he was foolish, but in the later stage, he was really bad. Kaido's blow to knock him out is the best proof. You said that Rayleigh is the guarantee of Shampoo and Luffy can roam. At least Grandpa of Judiciary Island is a naval hero and has a bunch of connections. Kidou, at the beginning, it was really true that he didn't even use his brain to fight, and his fighting instincts were gone. He was just a honey badger who said he wanted to become the Pirate King! Are you arguing with Luffy for the Pirate King? What's the difference between talking about logic with a psycho? Why. You want to say that the protagonist doesn't have the strength to support you, but if you don't have the strength and influence, why are you so interested in Luffy? Just go your own way.

That thing about Ace is just Xiaozhi

Ace's background is that his parents died and he was raised by Garp. It's good to be able to grow up. He can't compare with readers. Reader Feilu is his father! He is the invincible domineering president! What Ace did was unacceptable, so I wanted the protagonist to change Ace and change the bad ending. I hope the reader's father can show some mercy. For the sake of the author, just skip it if you don't like it.

Before writing, could you please consider the fact that ice conducts electricity? . .

Go. . Lick Ace, the thing whose brain was kicked by a donkey. Just press X

Luffy is barely half a pirate, so would he be soft on the navy? Dead and wounded.

This Pirates book is really good, the characters and personalities are very accurate and interesting.

About the first chapter of my careless book "Navigation: Starting a House of Time": Going to sea! Chapter review of Ghost Man Akin.