Urban Drama: Guan Juer and Qu Yaoxing Were Fascinated by the Beginning

Does the key protagonist have that kind of authority? He is not a high-level person. It doesn't matter if you set the protagonist's status higher.

Author, you have such strong taste, Yu Suqiu is a beauty

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I looked at the table of contents again. The author's writing style is not bad, but there is nothing new, it's boring, and it just sucks. There are too many works in comprehensive comics, and you have no new ideas. How do you stand out from the crowd?

You keep insisting that you are not the Holy Mother, but you are still helping. It is none of your business to help, and the bloodline of the protagonist is still high, so you can just give it to someone casually. How can you create another protagonist?

Author, you want to write a powerful villain in the next episode. You want to write about the phoenix bush coming out of the sun?

I suggest you take in all the female roles in all movies and TV shows,

I hope Lin Lei and Guan Ju'er get together. Although Qu is said to be a rich second generation, it really can't help anything. However, although Guan is not a rich second generation, I like her spirit very much. Her perseverance is very valuable. To be honest, if Lin and Qu are together, there is really nothing to see.

Too much nonsense, more than 20 chapters, more than 10 chapters of nonsense

It was fine before, but it's been fucked up here. Inexplicably written.

After reading a few VIP chapters, the plot about the mother is really **. As the main character, if you don't kill her, you are nothing but a cheating time traveler. Reality is tiring enough. There is no revenge in the novel. What is the benefit of arranging this kind of plot except to seduce people? I thought it was a good book, but it was ruined by this flaw. Everything is **** later. The more I think about it, the more angry I become.

It's only a few minutes before we can collect Andy. If we have to do some **, why don't we just collect it directly? Or don't write about this kind of place at all.

Many of the author's actions show that he is a waste, a joke, and a wall of sand.

It's getting worse and worse. I only see bragging here and bragging there.

I have a suggestion, pay attention to the plot, don't forcefully drag the protagonist into the story. Try to be as natural as possible, you are a bit stiff now.

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You said yourself that there are so many masters, and even if you don't use Pluto's move, you can kill a few of them in seconds, right?

Seeing so many people complaining about being frustrated, I'm sorry to bother**

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