Great Qin: I Bestow the Ancestor Dragon with a Ginseng Fruit and Pass On the Emperor's Way

Is this an immortal? Open a harem?! Can you write this book without forgetting them? If you can write about them in "Zheng Zheng", I will convince you! If it doesn't work, there's no need to write about the harem

Nowadays, writing novels requires no brain. If mortals take the elixir, they can ascend in the daytime. The villain can take it, but the protagonist cannot take it after getting it, otherwise he will explode and die due to the powerful medicine.

Why does the protagonist have to be written as sixteen or seventeen years old, not in his twenties or thirties? Is it good to write him as a minor and be scolded as a childish child everywhere? It's annoying to watch, as if there are no adults in China anymore, so children have to be the protagonists and act decisively.

I really don't understand why Qin Shihuang should give the skills to become an immortal? Wouldn't it be better for you to take these exercises yourself and then use these exercises to practice after the death of Qin Shihuang and the overthrow of the Qin Dynasty to create a new dynasty? With Qin Shihuang's egocentric and domineering character, do you think he would allow a superior god to stand above his head? No emperor would allow people and things beyond his control to escape from his control when he was powerful. Isn't it too small to underestimate an emperor's desire to control his own imperial power?

I don't know anything about the novel, and there is no dividing line between realms. In the early stage, I was flying to the sky and escaping, and in the later stage, I was riding a horse. I was really tired*

It doesn't matter if you like women, a dignified immortal even wants second-hand

This book is silly and the author's ideas are childish.

Could it be that as soon as I was sent here, I would lose my innocence? " Not to mention how uncomfortable and unwilling Concubine Yan was. Various thoughts came to mind. How can she remain innocent when she has a daughter?

I don't even know how to comment, harem, I'm convinced too, author, are you an otaku? Still haven't seen a beautiful woman, ugh

Zulong is great, but when his people are miserable,