Urban Drama: Beginning with Hu Zhuli

The more I read, the more speechless I become. I want to ask the author, have you really come across games like Genshin Impact: Honkai Impact and Samsung Dome Railway?

This piece of writing by Zhang Sanfeng is very poor.

When I saw him trying to save Zoro, I knew that this stick would definitely save Ace. I couldn't figure it out. Ace is your father.

Why is it necessary because I want to take Su Mingyu on a trip? Can't you get one? Seeing this, you can imagine that the choices of the protagonist will become more and more useless later. One is something that can be done easily but takes a little time, and a skill that takes a person more than half a lifetime to master, why did you choose the former one? Don't you really understand the protagonist's brain circuit? That skill is very useful whether it is used in shopping malls or in daily life, but it was given up for something that can be obtained with a lot of time and procedures!

If you can't write, just cut it off, don't make people's appetites

I am really speechless. There is only one main character name in the whole article that requires a lot of brainpower and creativity, yet you are copying it from each other. The main character's name is Su Chen. In Feilu, instead of one thousand, he has eight hundred.

The author has problems here, both in the plot and in the settings. Why not just kill them? Uchiha Itachi, let alone Uchiha Itachi in both worlds, is sad for the protagonist. Even if the protagonist doesn't know that Uchiha Itachi is using the kaleidoscope, the protagonist should kill you so cruelly. Don't tell me it's impossible or the plot must be like this. If it must be like this, then this book will be like that because it was said in the early stage that the protagonist is an extremely cautious person. Didn't it say that the protagonist invents the spirit-binding lurker to directly devour the soul in order to prevent the enemy from resurrecting? Isn't that an extremely cautious person? What would a prudent person allow? Apart from villains, I have never seen someone who has murderous intentions towards me still alive.

You are speaking too slowly. You have only been speaking for a few minutes. A mortal can hear it in a hundred years.

I've always wanted to ask: If the protagonist is so strong and still encounters danger, why can't he meet a foreigner? He's so brainless. Why are you mocking him?

The protagonist is too cowardly and keeps kneeling and licking her

This must have been written by AI, the protagonist is like a robot, he always said lightly, thought to himself, and sneered.

Comments on Chapter 65 of "Urban Drama: Cutting Off Hu Zhuli at the Beginning" written by Erba Dagang: Su Mingzhe: My family's problems are more complicated (please give me flowers and votes).

It may be related to contract matters

Author, open the chrysanthemum list, half of it is watery in one chapter, you are awesome.

Good to lick. I still think I'm very humorous, yuck

Brother, please tell me. Spring is here and I'm still not a lily of the valley person, I'm afraid

The writing is too messy and it's just a routine, lick* one

Stay calm and write well. There is no problem at the moment.

Regarding "Da Qin" written by Fenghuo Xi Zhuhou: Fighting for the title of Yingzheng, I will become the dragon that controls the country! Chapter 4 Successful petition for seal, bound to the national destiny system! Chapter review.

I'm reading chapter 50, although there are some flaws at the beginning. But in the end, the logic is self-consistent, but in Chapter 49, the ledger started. Su Daqiang and Zhao Meilan had a quarrel over the ledger. The next day, the child asked why and went astray to whether the ledger existed. The two of them together are over a hundred years old. If they hide things, can they treat it as nothing happened? Instead of solving the problem, Zhao Meilan hid the things and proudly let Su Daqiang find them. Have you lost your mind?

Comments on Chapter 11 of "Urban Drama: The Beginning of Hu Zhu Li" written by Erba Dagang: Zhu Li: I got to know the girl next door so quickly (please give me flowers and votes).

Commentary on Chapter 10: What are the Consequences of "The King of Fighters in the Marvel World" written by the silly and cute A Fei (please collect it).

Comments on Chapter 9 of "Urban Drama: Beginning with Hu Zhuli" written by Erba Dagang: Use future wages to pay current tuition (please give me flowers and tickets).

The ugly and cheap Qiao Yingzi would be better replaced by Wang Yidi or Huang Zhitao as the heroine.