Yaoyaoling Asked Me to Shoot a Promotional Video, and I Shot Infernal Affairs

When it comes to military dramas, the first thing that comes to mind is Soldier Assault. It's a real ceiling. You can't get tired of it no matter how many times you watch it.

Please make it clear to the author that these professions must have a certificate to practice, and it is illegal to have skills but no certificate.

The more I write, the more sandy the wall becomes, the clown protagonist

I have a perfect power system that covers the sky here Refining Qi Lun Hai Refining Qi into the Shinto Palace Refining God and Countering the Four Extremes of Voidness Refining the void and combining the Tao to transform into a dragon Earth Immortal Power Immortals and sages Golden Immortal Monkey King Emperor Taiyi Daluo Hongchenxian Quasi-Saint Immortal King Heavenly Saint and Immortal Emperor The Supreme Saint of Heaven (Hongjun) and the Invincible Immortal Emperor (Huangtian Emperor)

Isn't it okay to do a police story? When filming Infernal Affairs, are you a propaganda policeman or a gangster?

I keep following every update. After the protagonist finished filming a movie similar to Shawshank Redemption, the plot went downhill and became more and more incomprehensible. It was incoherent and seemed like two books.

He has become a retarded person since the beginning of the tribulation.

It's not you who dares to call Shi Hao in Zhetian

If you accept it, accept it. Don't give away girls or anything like that. It will displease both parties and lead to collapse. The two heroines are very good, but there must be no more!

The writing is too messy. It's a magical city and a dragon city. It's a mess. Can the author write more seriously?

Why did the protagonist agree to that Ye Ling'er? He agreed to whatever song he wanted to sing. Anyone who dares to attack someone will turn into a Zaun and spray her.

I started watching Red Mansions in **, and I haven't seen anyone take Jia Mu in until now. The author can't take her in, haha. . .

It's not impossible to watch if there are multiple female protagonists, but what you wrote is awkward and inexplicable. I came to see the protagonist make a movie, not to see you fall in love.

The female characters in it are very well written. Why should the male protagonist take care of her if she acts coquettishly? Just refuse. It doesn't matter if she has an unpleasant personality. She doesn't know how to behave in the world. Do she have to rely on the male protagonist?

Author! No matter how much you hate Cai Xukun, don't write it like this** us readers!

If you don't force the author, the car will take off.

It's where Kevin gave Xiao Shi a feather. The first time he said it was "I'll give it back to you." The second time he mentioned Feather was that she would tell you. The two are different. The first time actually said to Feather, "Yes, your body is right here. I'll give it back to you, Hua." Kevin's name for Feather is her. This is very important. If you write it wrong, the meaning will change.

Personally, I think it would be more in line with the requirements of the space agency to make a Chinese version of The Martian, right?

Come on, author, I hope you can write more rigorously, otherwise the plot will easily collapse later.

The latest chapter is so speechless, Xiao Wu is sent to the bar to perform a task, but Sha Bei takes advantage of him and makes him feel numb.

I tell you! If you don't have a million words, no eunuchs are allowed

Author, what exactly are you writing about? There are so many unreadable chapters. Did you write them too explicitly or didn't write them and uploaded empty chapters? Are you always fooling me like this? Bad review, no explanation!

I feel that the best part of the soldier's assault is the part where Ma Xiaoshuai joins the Seventh Steel Company and takes the oath. It's a pity that I didn't write this part.

I don't mean to criticize, it's just that Marvel and the like can't be regarded as cultural exports, right? Can it? What should be exported should not be one's own ideas and spirit, but also culture? Not quite understanding.

Dear author, I only have one request. You can open a harem but please don't tear down the original CP. There are quite a lot of beauties in the love apartment, such as Yu Mo, lawyer Celi, Xin Ling, etc.

The author's grave* may have been three feet high

It's such a hot-blooded drama, I was surprised to ask you to write it into a palace battle drama. Is there such insidiousness and cunning in Dragon Ball? Yamcha Klin, Piccolo and the others were all written by you as insidious conspirators, right? ? ? ? ? What a book that can really reflect a person's heart. The author himself is a sinister and shady person.

It's especially like a story about a domineering president with a hottie. After reading one chapter, I felt like vomiting! ! !

In fact, I wanted to say something, but since I am just practicing writing, forget it, there are indeed many shortcomings, so I can summarize and refine the outline of the next book.

Commentary on Chapter 8: Yanyin Village, Yanying, "Konoha: The Weasel's Knife is on My Neck at the Beginning" written by Taoist Priest and Two Dogs.