Supernatural for All: I Antu Sheng, Create a Dark Fairy Tale

There is no wolf eating grandma, that wolf is obviously the so-called grandma's transformation; there is no visit, it is just surveillance day after day; there is no cabin in the deep forest, it is obviously an indestructible prison; there is no hunter, it is obviously Little Red Riding Hood who expressionlessly crushes a "Wolf Grandma" who wants to escape from the prison.

I laughed when I read the introduction. Snow White's crystal slipper is evil. The glass slipper is the story of Cinderella. I don't even know the fairy tale and yet I wrote a dark version.

** I glanced at the introduction, and it turned out to be Snow White with crystal slippers and athlete's foot, what a guy!

Snow White seems to have nothing to do with the glass slipper, it should be Cinderella.

Enter the battlefield and write one chapter, handwriting is forbidden to write one chapter, and you only feel that it is a normal chapter after reading three chapters in a row.

It's been almost ten days, 40,000 words is too slow

Snow White, the vampire empress who killed her father and mother, has seven dwarfs expelled by the Titan family. Azathoth template of Sleeping Beauty. Thumbelina from the Marvel Zombies Universe Wasp template. The snake that bewitched Eve and was cursed after eating the fruit of wisdom (the farmer and the snake) A mermaid and siren hybrid, her voice has the ability to steal people's souls. After discovering that the mermaid tribe planned to steal her voice, the Siren Queen (the daughter of the sea) massacred the entire mermaid tribe.

Can you please stop smiling bitterly all the time? The protagonist you wrote is a character who can face SS. Why does he smile bitterly when he encounters something? Like S. B. He has experienced so much and will not grow.

And** it's a live broadcast. If it's not live broadcast, I don't know how to write it, right?**

Ace is also called Grandpa Garp, so Whitebeard becomes Ace's father. The protagonist can tell this joke.

Why change the name of the best person in the world? Apart from the two time-travelers, who else here knows that the world is number one? There is no need to change it at all, okay?

You'd better have some common sense. City people shouldn't write rural novels.

The plot progress is too long-winded and not good. It needs to be improved. Moreover, just writing about the movie would be too much and there would be too little about the heroine.

Can you change the layout? If you don't finish a sentence, change paragraphs. Can you segment like a normal person? It's not that there's something wrong with the book, it's just that the book's eight-point layout can be reduced to two points.

I'm thinking that these soul-transporting protagonists all use someone else's appearance and body to find their wives, and then, if the original body wakes up at the end, and then devours the protagonist's soul, is this a different kind of "your wife and daughter, I will support them"? However, I have read a novel before, which is also about a system. The system rebelled at the last moment. Although the protagonist won and swallowed up the system, he did not win completely because the protagonist's wife and daughter had already been cheated by the system. That's why I really don't like the protagonist of Soul Transmutation now, and some people talk about mental mysophobia, which is very speechless.

Pay attention to the paragraphs. The number of words in a paragraph should be fewer. Don't make a whole paragraph. It will be too hard to read.

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