An Ran Was Captured, and I Drove a Tank and Surrounded the Mercenaries.

096Why don't you write it until it's on the shelves?

The author's writing style is so embarrassing, and the first few chapters contain too many words about "insight-defying".

I could barely watch it before. Teresa became Otto's niece. I was really confused. The author was too arrogant.

That's nonsense, what kind of magic weapon is this? The combat power setting is very advanced, with only these few skills, and the high-end combat power equipment is not perfect. You should take a look at the heroic invincible undead master, how to write it, right? What the fuck did you write?

The dignified leader of the intelligence department wears military uniform when going out on missions? Mobilize the garrison at any time? Are you kidding, and there's no code name? Call it directly, is this true or false?

What the hell? Is the first chapter so poisonous?

The whole article is about how awesome this fifth unit is! But there is no specific combat power! How can you brag?

What I admire most is that you wrote the protagonist as lawless, and our army is really like this. Do you think we are not fighting among warlords now? Our army's first priority is to obey orders. You don't even know how to write a military article about this.

Too much illogical content, complete nonsense

*, Why is it written about Liu Xing, my brother in October? You damn author didn't write about my brother in October.

There's too much foreshadowing, Luo Li is so rude, can we just fight it?

The author, a captain yelled in front of a group of generals at the military exercise summary meeting. What's going on?

I don't know when I will come back again in my life, so I will keep it in my collection and calm down.

Too holy, nothing interesting to see

Just make do with it and don't ask for so much.

After watching it for so long, I can talk about the shortcomings. First, the combat power system has begun to collapse. There is no doubt that you will know it after reading it. Second, the Fools are too boastful. There is no doubt that the Fools are powerful, but they obviously cannot touch the Demon God, let alone the Seven Gods. Netizens will compare the Seven Gods, but they are only comparing the Seven Gods. The so-called Original God or other Demon Gods or Demon Gods other than the Seven Gods obviously cannot reach the Seventh God. The degree of God is certain. Even Nasida, as a branch of the World Tree, has now taken over the authority of the World Tree. Her importance is even more important among the seven gods. Even if the combat power is low, it is not something that the original gods can touch. Third, the self-created system is too frivolous. The span of the first three realms is huge, and the fourth to seventh realms start to become smaller. I originally thought I would refer to something, but now it seems very strange. Anyway, I will feel this way more or less when I see the following ones.

Which chapter opens the atomic egg?

I don't want to watch anymore as I look at it. We are about to go to war. I don't know how time is running out! Before the war, he was shouting slogans and pouring poisonous chicken soup

I found that the beginning of each chapter repeats the last word count of the previous chapter. The author has many tricks. It is easy for the author to lose the reader's interest by doing so.

Your attributes have been digitized. When I watch martial arts, why don't I just read online game novels? People should be more rigorous. Do you want to learn martial arts to add attributes, use weapons to add attributes, and internal energy consumption to reduce attributes? Can these be digitized so absolutely?

Www.(). Con share it

If you change the cover to look better, maybe more people will read it.

In a world like Qin Shi's, what are you going to do with so many strength and agility attribute points? Martial arts are all about internal strength. You have more than 20 strength points at the age of 12, and you need ** points at the second-rate peak. This is a ton of strength. . .

Can I ask the source of the picture in Chapter 38? OO

The military ranks do not match. There is a big difference. It is recommended to modify it.

Although it is Shuangwen, at least you have to bring it with you, right? Is that something you can drive out if you want? It's amazing that you didn't hit anyone in the report.

I'm convinced. Why does martial arts start with a smile on the face of the world? In the West, super powers are out of control. It's a bit new. Although it's an old book, I still have to complain. It's really disgusting. Domestic martial arts starts with a smile on the face of the world.

Author, even if you want eunuchs, can you finish writing this game so that it can be the finale? Why stop it here? I probably won't be able to write ten pictures of this last paragraph. Try your best. It would be too uncomfortable to stop it here.

Are there bricks in the woods? A dozen soldiers each had a brick. Where did the bricks come from? Also, Hu Xing and Wang Yanbing were defeated. The mercenaries were stupid and didn't know how to take hostages. What's going on?

The span of the first few hundred pictures is okay, but later on when integrating into the plot, the author didn't write the word "water" because there is nothing wrong with it. Forcibly merging them is boring.