Jiangshi: I Cultivate the Dao for Fun

I don't know how the author's writing is. Anyway, the criticism is quite powerful. Many of the negative comments about him have been deleted.

The master's senior brother should be called master uncle!

The protagonist is really clumsy, whining, and reasonable. When he gets angry and gets into fights, the other party apologizes, and the protagonist reconciles like a brother. He is really speechless, he fights and kills whenever he wants, and he still tries to reason with others. To tell you the truth, it's the same. The author is really talented.

The author is a virgin bitch

If you don't know the plot of the fanfic, would it be a bit sadistic? Being betrayed and deceived by various high-quality villains, if you avoid them all, it is better to know the direction of the plot in advance. If it is too cruel or the quality of the villains is lowered, the plot conflicts will be reduced. It is not easy to write this well. Most of Feilu's stories are entertaining. Personally, I think it's better to know the direction of the plot, otherwise the villains will appear and die. . .

Isn't the master's senior brother called uncle? Why did he become a junior uncle, and why did the ninth uncle become a junior brother inexplicably later?

He is a very sensible and discerning person at the beginning! Why did you become a gangster after you left the master? Fighting people all day long! As soon as I yelled at him, he figured it out and asked him for advice. Hahahaha.

That hole came from God. That chapter

Uncle Jiu is the senior brother of Fourth Eyes. It is only right to call him Senior Uncle. Return him to Senior Uncle~

I haven't seen the movie series, so I don't know the plot. Then the question comes, I don't know the plot, how to write this book. No, it's →_→ a few shrimps leaked.