Villain: The Female Lead Shows Up Pregnant from the Start
反派:开局被女主带球找上门
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 309k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
142Chapters
2.1MReads
38.9kFlowers
10.0Score
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It's so embarrassing to read... This, this, this... Brother, you are writing a novel. Didn't the editors advise you to cut it? Just cut it...
The opening plot is about the strongest family being wiped out. How did a mercenary kid wipe out your top rich family? You have to have some logic! As mentioned before, the mercenary is the youngest protagonist in it, so you, the richest family, are useless!
The heroine at the beginning is pregnant with a child, which is too poisonous
Do you know why the grades are so bad? It doesn't look like a cool article at all. Just find a class and take it.
No wonder there are no flowers. At this level, don't write a book.
I admire your courage very much. Anyone who has read FL novels can write better than you. Where do you get the confidence to persist in writing? The five poisons are not as poisonous as yours.
I found that those who despise all kinds of trivial articles are often the ones who write trivial articles themselves. From this, I have a bold guess. Those who despise all kinds of trivial works of Long Aotian Hou Palace, 80% of them themselves are in that category. This is called peers looking down on each other, and same sex repelling each other. What I am ashamed of is that in the few books I wrote in the past, I was 100% sure to despise the main protagonist group. It is really dangerous in the world.
Cut this book. If you have the time, you can start a new book. Read more about the popular themes and start a new book. Don't write such an embarrassing and heartbreaking book, and it doesn't look like the results are very good.
The protagonist is just a salty fish? He is such a loser and has basically no plot connection with the protagonist of the novel. After he finds a partner, it becomes a love story. But I find it really awkward when the two of them get along.
Look at which author of yours wrote this. Here are the processing rules, 30 pages, what are you thinking about?