I Am an Immortal and Have Been Exposed by the Heavens

I'm confused by what I wrote in the first few chapters. The protagonist is the same as fuck. Ancient Yi doesn't want to change. Okay, I'll bear with it. The big clock has super-god-like technology in the universe. It takes dozens of minutes to analyze vibranium... You've already built a building with your hands. With the technology of "Qiankun", doesn't it take a minute to build a base? Still looking for workers to build it? After analyzing the vibranium, can't you rub it with your own hands? Nico followed him as soon as he arrived. Is he Gu Yi's biological son? Can you be located so quickly? And when Vibranium was used to create something, Wakanda found you? Yuri Klaw couldn't be caught for so many years? Completely written by a blind person

It's very fascinating to watch, and the author, does he know what a live broadcast is? In the live broadcast room, you have to pay the platform for live broadcast. People are always watching in the live broadcast room.

After seeing three pictures, I can't stand it anymore. It's so awesome.

How could Frieza be able to break through the dimensional wall? If so, even under the attack of the God of Destruction, many people have traveled through time, including when they were fighting against the Super Saiyan God.

When Shi Hao was a child and his life was released in the world at that time, are you sure he could still survive? Geniuses also need to grow. How can you let a child fight against a quasi-immortal emperor? ? ?

New to the trap, this protagonist has no outsiders, he is outrageous enough to kill Tao at the age of 20, and he is not a saint at birth like Wu Shi.

There are fewer and fewer of them. All we can say is that we are ready to run away.

I just read the beginning, and I felt it was so greasy... How old is the author?

Don't change the names of people in the novel randomly. It will look awkward. If there is anything you can't write about, others can write it but you can't, so don't do it.

You, the author, are a salty person. In the second chapter, if the tofu is salty, what is the purpose of dividing it into sections?

That's it for today, Guan Fei opens p.

Big Brother, Big Brother, are you kidding me? Are the generals just above the golden elixir?

Obviously I want to dress up as a woman, just looking for reasons for myself

Wouldn't it be nice to take over Hei Jue? The finale of Naruto is over

Author, if the protagonist has a fruit, I hope it is a fantasy beast type. There are too many natural and superhuman ones. The most natural type is Thunder, which is so delicious that it can be eaten all over the world.

Predicting other people's future was okay at first, but it became more and more uncomfortable later on. Predicting the future? Hehe! ! !

That's not how Shuangwen is written. . . .

Author, can you write about Super Seminary? Can you write about Qilin? Join the chat**, I want to see the communication between the protagonist and the angel. The angel should belong to the protagonist, the God.

I can't read Chapter 40. Are you revising it?

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Personal opinion, can you use less of the word "beast"? This word is really ****.

This is a system where you get rewards for accepting apprentices. What's the point of accepting a disciple and waiting for rewards in return without teaching anything?

Those people (experimental subjects) need to be killed, stop causing trouble, and become your subordinates

Tsk tsk, author, you actually asked me to wash your hands for you Flowers?

Come on! But don't get too watery.

The plot is too confusing, and the economic aspect is unreasonable. How did you do it to turn one million into more than 10 million in a short time? How did you buy the unfinished building for more than 10 million? The interest rate of 150 million a month on depositing 1 billion in the bank is outrageous.

You're missing quite a few chapters. The first free chapter is missing two chapters.

After seeing it, he is not a Buddha. He is not a Buddha. He is so awesome. He is not hungry. He has posted a lot. He is not convinced. He urges and urges him not to write it as a iron for him. Yes, yes, yes. Then why don't you urge him? He is too hungry even if he drinks.

Comments on the chapters written by Wu "Da Ming: Sleeping with the Princess at the Beginning, Spoilers for the Future to Save Your Life" [16] Your Majesty, your grandson is also dead, and will die faster.

Regarding Chapter 16 of "Live Broadcast: I, a Hexagonal Taoist, Revitalize Taoism" written by Insomnia Planet, the Golden Light Divine Curse, this young man, damn! (Please give me flowers and votes) Chapter review.