People Are Intercepting Religion and Planning to End the Prehistoric Times

This book increases the average strength of pirates by at least 10 times

Do you have the brains to write a novel? Even if he is not favored, he is Ying Zheng's son. You, Zhao Gao, can make things difficult for you in front of Ying Zheng? Kill if you want? Accepted, Zhao Gao is just a sealer, just a *, now he bites the owner blatantly, do you think Ying Zheng will kill him? Don't write Zhao Gao in such a good way, okay?

The protagonist is identified as a eunuch. He is hiding in his room and playing with inflatable dolls in the apocalypse. It's really you. This is the first time I've seen such a quarrelsome protagonist.

What Conan asked and Kugasao answered. Although Cugaso is no longer from the winery, why should he answer Conan's question? Does she like children that much? And that nurse, the child acted coquettishly on him and put him into the resting place of Kucasso. Shouldn't a normal person keep him out? Ask him questions like why he knows Kugasou is here. The whole hospital is full of protagonists, how can this nurse know who Kugaso is? Let a strange child in at random? These are the poison points in my opinion.

The protagonist has no idea what an enemy is and dares to trade directly at the beginning.

I wouldn't have been able to write this book without having cerebral thrombosis for ten years.

Sima Yan killed the emperor in the street? Did the author learn history in a dream?

Write the king to death and take the queen...

My thoughts after reading the plot, how should I put it, the author's writing style is a bit immature, and the protagonist's character. I know you want to write a gentle and humble character like a young master, but after reading it, the character is there, but a little out of touch, and there is even a hint of a second-generation teacher going crazy. I don't recommend this description, because it is not flattering in a comprehensive comic, and the protagonist's modesty is too deliberate. On the contrary, It makes people feel embarrassed, and the treatment of female characters is indeed a bit awkward. If there is no communication, there is no need to stick to them and be attentive. Either pave the way for the emotional sublimation of the characters, or treat them rationally, otherwise it will cause a weak viewing experience. Sometimes the words spoken by the protagonist have unnecessary hahaha, surprise and other expressions. This kind of speech is a bit inconsistent with the character. Anyway, take your time and see how the author improves in the future.

Let me write about the captain. I haven't seen the captain in the event story for a long time. I can only see it in the second creation fandom. No one knows where the real captain is. Maybe he has left.

I'm a little confused about what the fire element provided by this system is for. ? I'm really speechless

You are not in your own world. Don't write any plot about the rise and fall of a country. You are not from the same world. If you are reading a novel and insist on writing it like this, do you really have no plot? Make money to do things. Did the protagonist live in that world since he was a child? The sense of immersion is very ex

Just keep being a paper tiger and putting on airs?

Saga was formed by using the Shield of Pajra as the main body to guide the fusion of the three Ultraman, and retained part of the power of Gauss and Dyna after the end. Allowing Zero to transform into other forms through the bracelet.

I feel like I'm going to create a new trend of cool writing.

It's appropriate, after all, hit a stick and feed a sweet date, right?

I deleted the comment, I feel guilty Haha

Chapter 32: Will the protagonist be shoveled back after being shoveled?

70+15=94,?, Can the author use some snacks?

With a system, you can still keep it going for so long without ending. This shows that this book is a waste of money and time.

Can you update it faster? Not enough reading!

Nuwa said, "What do you think of me? Hahahaha."

Asking for flowers, asking for rewards, asking for monthly tickets, and asking for reviews! I beg all you gentlemen, please reward me with flowers and smash me to death!

Do you want it to be released until it is put on the shelves?

Why isn't there a Chapter 12?

How long does it take for this yellow plum to bloom and bear fruit? The time Tongtian set for the pig's feet earlier was one yuan, but how come the original one later set it to 10,000 years? Can a spiritual root like Huang Zhongli still cultivate a weakened version of the second generation?

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In fact, I think the original cover is better, and I regret that I had taken the screenshot earlier. Also, this kind of seeking for truth is more common in ** and is common here.

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