City: the Golden Elixir of Martial Arts at the Beginning, Sweeping the Protagonist

I suggest that you watch less of Feilu, and try to float as much as you can. You are a fool to recharge money. You will only use less than one-third of it, and the rest will disappear inexplicably.

Isn't there a more domineering protagonist? Insidious, sinister, and decisive in killing, since you know the plot, why should you follow the plot? Now that you are the protagonist, with strength, money, and background, why do you have to wait for the opportunity in the plot? They always start with women. What is the identity of the protagonist? Why must he be willing to do it? He is named Qin Zheng, but he does not have the tyranny of the First Emperor. As long as I don't die, who dares to rebel?

Uncle Jiu is so ignorant of things. He doesn't understand a single thing. He has been his apprentice for so many years and he still doesn't know what kind of person he is. He still unjustly accuses someone else. How can Uncle Jiu be so ignorant?

In front of Su Qinghuan's biological father, he said that he wanted her to be a plaything. Mu Zhaozhao also wanted to let her be his concubine. I have rarely seen other harem stories where wives and concubines are so clearly divided. These women are interested in you and you still have to belittle them. This protagonist really has no heart

Let me see how many more people are chasing.

After reading the first three chapters, I feel that the protagonist is raised by the system*

If you don't join the Super Seminary, it's pretty cool. If you join, why not be a captain? Isn't it bound to the Super Seminary?*

Every time I read a book about Marshal Tianpeng, no matter how good the appearance modifiers are, they don't work. What comes to my mind is always a pig.

I don't like goblins anymore after watching Brother Kill!

Too watery! The background will be slowly set along with the plot! Not much plot! It's all nonsense! With the dozens of chapters you have written now, it would not be enough to make two episodes of a TV series! Not happy at all!

In those days, the more famous you were, the more people wanted to punish you, so keeping a low profile was the right choice.

It would be great to write games in the virtual genre. Why is it so difficult to write games?

Various supplementary settings and background explanations at the beginning. Do you think you were writing essays in elementary school? I need to give a detailed explanation. The actual plot advancement is only a little bit. It gives me a headache when I see it. There is no theme at all. You can write a poem and write six or seven chapters. Are you writing a book from heaven? If you are so good at water, other people just put it on the shelves and start watering. Your starting point is that tomorrow I will send you to space to create water and use your water to extinguish the sun.

Do you need to be serious about Japan's military? Thirty percent of the peak combat power of a Mie Dao can scare the J-star. As long as you write about the Dragon Ball-type J-star, I can also accept a pirate to touch the porcelain super god.

It's not an exaggeration to call him the Water King. I fought the first monster, and I still didn't lose after five draws. I was all talking to myself, all kinds of inner drama, how to be strong, I did it, you can feel free to do it, see you in the next article.

There is an explanation of the original novel before and after each small plot. The original novel explains many times more than what I am reading now. There is so much nonsense.

I suggest you make the male villain a castrated character. If you don't use it in the whole book, why would you hook up with a lot of beauties? Just cut it off at the beginning, so we readers don't have to worry so much.

The more I watch it, the less I want to watch it. Is the author trying to rub the IQ of the people in Naruto on the ground? I know you shouldn't read fan fiction like this with your brain in mind, but you are too naive. The protagonist is an orphan. How did he know about the situation in the Kingdom of Waves? Moreover, the protagonist has not graduated, and he has never finished a task. How did he know that the person who posted the task would hide the task level? Gil is bullshit

There is so much nonsense, one chapter is just a little bit of text, the rest is all nonsense

It's so fucking stupid that you can't keep writing the same thing over and over again, right?

What are modern weapons and equipment used for? What kind of grand master is that?

The writing that goes to ** is too arrogant, and if you have some strength, it will swell. What a fucking thing

After reading the first few chapters, I felt that it was watery enough, but I couldn't bear to read the later chapters and it became even more watery.

This novel is full of nonsense, I'm going to throw up

I got fooled, read a few chapters without reading the comments, and almost died from poison!

The protagonist, Da Luo Jinxian, only has the power of 13 mountains. Da Luo has already jumped out of the river of destiny. He is drunk. It sounds like this is not as good as the dragon-elephant prajna skill of Guo Xiang's master Jinlun Dharma King. At least it still has the power of dragon-elephant. This is too low-matching.

The performance of the protagonist and the pirate group is too good

As the title says, European beauty boxing is harmful to people. Fiona was still beautiful in the original painting before, but now she is an aunt!

What do you think about this theme? How about participating in the Sisters of Wind and Waves variety show?

Do you think the protagonist is a fool, or are you a fool yourself?