Livestream: Patriotic Professor Makes a Million Netizens Cry

I want to ask, has the protagonist done those three things?

The writing is not good! The writing is a bit confusing!

I was confused when I read it, and the punctuation marks were used erratically.

The intention is very good, but the writing style is a bit lacking, and the writing is a bit rushed. In many places, it feels like it has been cut off from the beginning and the end. It looks a bit foggy and misses a lot of things. You are debating or giving a speech. Dialogue is very important. It will be more enjoyable to write in more detail. Otherwise, you will not be happy if you just tell me that the result is not the process.

After reading a few chapters, I only remember a few sentences. I don't know what the problem is, but there is something wrong with the writing.

The chapters are too confusing and the punctuation is poor. That's it, please, let's not talk about the writing style. At the very least, the sentences, chapter breaks, and punctuation must be done well!!!!

It looked baffling. It's like writing a report. The main view is not set very well. The plot is too poor*

About Chapter 1 of "Live Broadcast: Patriotic Professor, Crying to Millions of Netizens" written by Mr. Long Qi: Youth Powerful Program! [Kneel down and beg for flowers! ] Chapter review.

The subject matter is good, give it a while and then read it again

Come on, Feilu has never had this kind of subject matter. You created the first one. Come on, keep writing. There will definitely be a future.