Sailing: I Have a Brother Named Barrett

How should I put it? Would it be better if the novice gift pack at the beginning is the power of Li Yuanba? The author, you can create a sword demon swordsmanship? Is this the idiot protagonist in the eyes of outsiders?

Pirate fanfics that don't eat Devil Fruits are soulless novels. The biggest thing about reading fanfics is a sense of immersion. More than 80% of them are probably immersed in reading. Is there someone who has the ability to eat natural disasters and destroys the world with just two fists? If the writing style is not enough to describe the fruit's ability to fight, then focus on writing novels and leave.

It's not good for all cadres to wear suits, such as Hawkeye and Bear. Their clothes are very good in the anime, much better than suits. It's not bad for subordinates to wear suits uniformly. Cadres should have their own characteristics and clothing.

I think we can consider Tuntun Fruit and Lucky Fruit. I feel that the protagonist's current route is to just take Saitama's way of defeating ten levels with one strength, so it is better to use the magic of Devil Fruit to increase his methods. In addition to synthesizing new substances, Tunton Fruit can also be developed in the direction of the Immortal Thief in Liuku under One Person and the ultimate organism in JOJO. Needless to say about lucky fruits, in the ancient times, even the saints of heaven were pursuing luck. With this thing, whether you are looking for something or the probability of talents appearing in the territory will increase, and with luck, it is equivalent to having a template for the protagonist of a light novel.

It's quite powerful to be scolded like this.

Eh? Is the one on Sky Island a phantom beast? I feel like it's an ordinary horse fruit. As for the ability to fly, isn't that something that comes with the bird? The phantom beast species seem to have special abilities: Kaido's heat breath flame cloud, Sengoku's shock wave

Good plot control, author, this novel is very good.

This twin reminds me of Momonosuke and his sister. Unless there is an accident for the protagonist, immortality is basic. If the character of the twin is not well grasped, the subscription may be lost, so I still don't like to read novels about future generations.

Author, where is your guaranteed ten updates?

If someone dubs the five-pointed star, you will add their name to the five-pointed star.

Become a person with multiple fruit abilities, a superhuman type fruit crushing fruit or a rejection fruit, and another phantom type humanoid fruit

As long as the pirates' top strength attacks can be defended, the rest is almost a war of attrition. The protagonist chooses several fruits. The first Dark Fruit is worth buying because it can restrain all fruits. In addition, if it is developed towards the black hole, it is also very powerful. The second phantom beast species can enhance physical strength and defense. The third if it is to enhance confrontation. In fact, the Momo Fruit is the first choice, the most powerful auxiliary fruit of Tiger Balm, otherwise it is unreasonable. The rule system, but to be honest, it is difficult to develop the rule system, and the template is fixed. If it is a high-level fruit of the rules, the development potential is huge, such as high-level space fruits such as doors, mirrors, or teleportation, which can apply various space techniques as desired, or high-level time fruits of time and regress. However, the original works of these fruits are not available. Otherwise, all kinds of BUG fruits are the best, just add the name of Three Thousand Avenues to it.

By the way, author, have you ever thought about a question, why doesn't the country invite the protagonist to drink tea? No matter where it is, unless the people in the parallel universe are masters, if the country is managed by ordinary people, then the protagonist will definitely be invited to sit there. This is inevitable. To be honest, I can't understand this novel.

After watching it, I'll have to take care of myself again for a while.

I read about the work. Is the protagonist a fish-man? Can accept Aaron and Hody Jones

Updates are too slow, of course no one sees them.

Why doesn't the author update it? What a great book

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