Siheyuan: the Hero Saves the Beauty at the Beginning

What do you think is the poisonous point of this Siheyuan article? Please tell me!

Doesn't the protagonist have a system backpack? He encountered so many gold and silver treasures several times without taking them?

Aren't you going to give Fa Yi Tong Tian Lu?

The protagonist is also a scumbag, and he also says that Yi Xiaochuan is a scumbag and is sick.

Author, I know that you want to write a more realistic protagonist, but the problem is that the protagonist really looks like a fool because the level is not high enough. In addition, the arrangement of some scenes is not reasonable enough, which is self-defeating and affects the expressiveness of the work.

The character of the protagonist is quite annoying, he looks like a Riddler! ! It's enough to just explain a lot of things clearly, you have to lie!

It feels like the audience watching the live broadcast and the country have more roles than the male protagonist. Whenever the male protagonist performs, he immediately switches to the country, cutting back and forth. Especially when the male protagonist breaks the situation, the camera is given to the audience and the country. Although it is more interesting to interact with the audience and the country to reason, the plot is mainly based on the protagonist until it is suitable.

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Author, there are too many inconsistencies in your writing. The first thing you write is to be specific, but the second part is flirting with girls.

And the system means practicing hard.

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The protagonist doesn't talk much. I like the subject very much. The plot is tightly connected, but the pace is a bit too fast. It could be slowed down a bit and more detailed descriptions added. The appearance of some characters is a bit abrupt and there is very little description of the environment. It can be read as a refreshing novel, but it cannot be read in detail. This is the first time I've seen a fan of Xeno Invasion, so I hope the author won't stop updating.

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Except the protagonists are all pigs and have no brains.

In fact, I think adding Japanese to a bunch of Mandarin is very

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