Controller: My Disciple Matched the Ssr Indigo Template

On the abnormal transformation process of ordinary people after obtaining the system

What I want to see is a protagonist who is unscrupulous, lawless, domineering, and does everything for himself. He doesn't want to become the patron saint of his country and the world!

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. They only have one chapter in a few days.

? ? ? What does the author have to do with another book, the first chapter is almost the same? Even the people drawn from the template are the same

The power went out in the middle of coding and I vomited.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing can only be said to be average. The protagonist is exposed to this person and that person at every turn. The confidentiality is extremely poor and he even writes a record book. Since his sister is suspicious, she can search it and find it. Don't doubt his ability.

If you can't write about "high IQ", then don't write about it. Does Aizen know how to gossip? Will you see the protagonist flirting with other girls if their relationship is not clear? Would you ever think about popping your nose in front of others? Also, the high IQ you wrote about cannot really be described, and it doesn't sound like you are writing a book about fighting. Just compare it directly at the A or AA level. Does Uncle Snake care about human affairs? People only care about eternal life. Do they care about anything else, even the protagonist's love? Moreover, the supporting character in the description is a fool, right? He directly destroyed other people's frontline bases and destroyed other people's plans for the world. He actually said that he would only fight in a small way and not attack the protagonist with all his strength? The more I watch, the more boring I become. No logic, no IQ, no fighting, no...

There was no prime minister in the Qing Dynasty. Thank you.

What about the first two hundred and forty-three?

**, The Innate Five Directions Flag is just a top-grade innate spiritual treasure?

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Why does it always feel wrong after reading more than a hundred chapters? Have you tried another person?

The author writes very well and looks very good, but there is a big shortcoming,,,,,,,,, that is,,,,,, the update is too slow. . . . . .

Why is there no one in the book review section?

This rhythm is very comfortable to watch

What is the name of the over 1 million word book that the author mentioned in his introduction?

In this kind of novel, family members and the like are really superfluous, especially if the protagonist's family members are police officers and the like. After reading this, you will basically know what will be written later.

There are too many settings that hinder the performance. The protagonist has a younger sister. The main point is that they are not close to each other because they are on opposite sides. The emotional scenes are written in a mess. If there is no emotional scene, the score will be doubled! In a dark novel, you want to write the protagonist as a good guy? There is no need to deliberately do bad things, but this kind of deliberate not harming innocent people harms the interests of the protagonist! Maybe I'm afraid of harmony, so I wrote it as Zhao Guo. He was originally the dark protagonist, but he also wanted to write it as the Virgin Mary.

I had a book similar to yours a long time ago, but I wrote about myself, so I cut it.

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This book is okay. I can still read it now. It's much better than other people who get confused after reading hundreds of chapters.

The content of the writing is okay. In addition to the strength value of the protagonist, other attribute points should also be improved. Is it possible to update it more?

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