In the Land of Light: I Started with the Hades Template

Pluto is almost ruined

The writing is not good, and the background is not good either! You are my son and you take the template of Pluto. Alas, I am convinced. You can be Beria's brother! No matter how you think about it, it's better than being someone else's son!

Can you let me meet your real big brother? Don't come if you have less than 8 stars, you are not there yet.

Where is the author from? Are you just talking about that? Don't you ever finish it? There are dozens of words like "that" in one chapter, so it's not annoying to read. "Zero", "Seno", and "Ged" are hard to read.

After I pretended to be cool, I discovered that there is nothing more lonely than being alone in this world, because my pretending to be cool no longer meant anything.

It affects my reading very much. Every picture and every few chapters has a word "at this time", or "at this moment", or "right now". I go, it affects my reading very much. I am so entertained by it.

Everything else is good, except for the group with poor combat prowess, and those who directly transform and chant sutras next to them during the battle. It is better to chant sutras as a human body, and then transform and take action at the end, which is a bit more stylish.

Author, the scale of the protagonist's Xuanming black hole is too small, it should be larger than the scale of the galactic lightning release

Sero's brother should be called Sailian. Think about it, when the fight starts, I will be! Ultraman, Sailian. Very cool.

I always emphasize keeping a cold face and then show up to show off.