In Konoha, Slow and Steady Wins the Race

In fact, among the most upright people in Konoha, Kai is the one. Orochimaru killed the third generation, and Kai could have been saved, but he didn't take action. You must know that his father opened the eight gates and beat the seven people into the lucky three treasures. Konoha did not believe it. The testimony of the three genin had little credibility, so Konoha did not recognize Dai's achievements, and there was no compensation for Kai. In addition, the father and son basically lived in ridicule, and those who were not strong would probably die. If Kai didn't have disciples and friends, it's unknown whether he would have opened the Eight Gates to fight Madara. You have to believe in the darkness of Konoha and think about Naruto's childhood life.

The world of Naruto is a world that depends on blood. Without blood and plug-ins, even if you are a top talent, you can only practice to the shadow level, because the shadow level is the limit of human beings. As for the protagonist, who has no blood, no plug-ins, and insufficient talent, he will be a jounin at most. Therefore, in the world of Naruto, the stupid bird flying first is of little use, and hard work and diligence are of no use. Without blood or cheats, he will always be cannon fodder in the world of Naruto!

Since you are transparent, why don't you practice honestly and insist on giving advice to famous people and looking for Hinata Hinata at the same time? If you think the third generation and the Hyuga clan are dead, why won't they pay attention to you?

Why do you think that people are smarter than you and have more advantages than you? Can't even fly. Maybe you just started flying when others were flying when they went out.

The licking gou in licking gou is really licking. Trust me, don't watch it.

The protagonist's name is Murong Su, that's Naruto, Naruto! It's not like he was born in time traveling. Who among the people in Naruto would name their child Murong Su who grew up as a child???

First of all, Hinata's appearance was too sudden and unreasonable. You can write that you saved Hinata, but a chance encounter is simply impossible! Hinata doesn't see anyone blushing, she only sees Naruto blushing. If you don't believe it, look at Shino, Kiba, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Xiaoqiang, etc. Except for Naruto, no one else gets this treatment.

The main character is just a licker, and he says let nature take its course. Anyone can write a novel.

Hokage doesn't have Otsutsuki's blood. It can be said to be a fantasy to rise. Unlike pirates, Naruto can still take off even if he is born weak and is lucky enough to get a powerful devil fruit. Even if he encounters a powerful devil fruit, the chance of encountering a powerful devil fruit is not high, but it is much better than Naruto. In the later stages of Naruto, the Otsutsuki family will fight each other. The most outstanding commoner in Hokage seems to be Orochimaru Minato Kai, but I am afraid that they will not be able to interfere with the fighting power of Rokudo Madara and Obito Kaguya.

It would be perfect if you write less emotional scenes. If it doesn't work, you can develop the heroine. It doesn't mean that it is written *actually for the protagonist's age group. As long as you are not a pervert, who can have such feelings for a six or seven-year-old girl?