Three Kingdoms Online Game: I Am Also Very Lucky to Follow the Lead

The first part was okay, it was written normally, but after a few chapters it started to get messy. There is no need to write about the reactions of other celebrities one by one. I wrote about Han Hong, Sun Nan, Sun Nan, Yuan Yawei, Deng Ziqi, Zhang Jie, Mao Buyi, and later Yang Mi and Dilraba were involved. It was necessary. Well, just write about two or three people in this kind of plot, and just go through it in one go. People are not here to see how you expand the conflict and how you accumulate anger, but to see how cool you are at fighting back and how awesome the protagonist is. What's the use of having to write a few chapters of this kind of plot? The number of words is too much to make it easier to publish? But would anyone look at such water? No one sees it as useful? I don't even understand this, really

Commentary on Chapter 29: Going to the Battlefield, Please Be More Serious, Chapter 29 of "National Destiny: The Taotie Chef, the God of Cooking" written by Guanhualang.

This is a copy of Let's Start Raising Dragons Today. The plot is exactly the same.

I think it's actually pretty good, but I hope the author can connect the plot well.