I Took Out a Transmigrator and Became the Beasts Pirates' Vice Captain

Why do bereavement aid always fail in the later stages? Red Hair, Moonlight, Zoro... And the reason every time is always strange. Red Hair, you said he has more people, so that's okay. But Moonlight is so funny, just because the intelligence agent can't see the information in the fog, so you just keep waiting until he comes out? Even so, why don't you intercept me halfway and insist on going directly to the Navy Headquarters? Okay, in order to establish your authority, but you failed, what on earth were you doing? From the news, it seems that you invented a pirate demon-slaying order and slapped the navy in the face, but... So what? Your purpose is always unfulfilled. Finally, the person you have been unable to kill was killed by a junior. In order to get the autumn water back, you went to Sauron again, but... You were stopped by the bear again? You don't know how to listen to people's inner voices, but you don't take any precautions. How come it turns out that the protagonist you wrote was not the mourning helper, but Rufu?

I fell down and died of poison in more than forty chapters

Since the protagonist knows the secrets of the world, don't make the plot so stupid. If you continue writing it as you will, wouldn't it be equivalent to following the old path of the original work and being defeated by Wang Lufei. Moreover, your Fruit of Strength should be the top-ranked Fruit of Gravity, so why is it so low? It always rejects the knife and cuts with gravity. Can you pull the moon down? No matter how bad it is, the Shinra Heavenly Conquest, the earth exploding into the sky, or meteorites falling from the sky will do. Can the move names be more awesome? The protagonist's move names are not as awesome as the supporting characters.

Nowadays, time travelers are getting harder and harder to mix with, and they have become a gift package for the natives.

Really pulling the crotch, the protagonist is of no use at all, the author dare not touch any of the slightly important original plot characters, and the assassin, which plot character have you killed? He only dares to use some minor tricks, and the author's writing skills can only follow the original plot**

I feel that the only difference from the original work is that there is one more protagonist. There is no change. Yamato, the cancer, is still on the old path of rebellion.

Is the protagonist a native of Wano?

If you travel through time, it's better to write about time travel. If you write about a little devil, what's interesting about it? When reading novels, you can substitute for others, but you are Japanese, and it makes me uncomfortable to read it**. You can scold me if you like. I never read comments and replies.

So I can come to the conclusion that your One Piece fandom is not much different from the original one. After all, although there seems to be an additional mourner and Kaido seems to have a mastermind, so what, you haven't changed anything. Above, I really think your writing is very good. In order to be able to concentrate on following the progress, I temporarily put aside the Godfather that I was originally chasing and just followed you. After all, it is the world of pirates and I am afraid of getting involved. However, I was really a little disappointed in the middle and later stages.

Another little plum has entered the palace?