Wuxia: Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils from the Start, Stealing Duan Yu’s Opportunity

Gan Baobao, Qin Hongmian, Dao Baifeng, Ye Erniang, Abi, Azhu, Azi, Menggu, Tianshan Tonglao, Li Qiushui, Meilanzhuju, Mu Guifei, the favorite concubine of Yelvhongji, the Daozong of Liao Dynasty, Ruan Xingzhu, Kang Min, Li Qingluo, the sister of the fairy sister Li Qiushui,

???? A bit inconsistent???? It can be said that Duan Yu's opportunity is easy to obtain as long as you know the time and you can actually wait until it comes before you ask for it? In the first place, you made it look like you didn't know the plot, and then you made it look like everyone knew everything, such as Futon and Li Qiu Shui, so does the protagonist know the plot or not???

Do you know how to absorb gong when writing martial arts novels? Recruitment? Is it still called martial arts if there is no martial arts test? Nowadays, the novels about time-traveling martial arts have no routines. How many moves did Tianshan Plum Blossom Master try? In your eyes, it means nothing. If you catch and defeat Duan Yanqing, why don't you ask him for a yangzhi? I think Yun Zhonghe's light work is better than Lingbo Weibu's, because every time he appears he flies around lightly, while Lingbo Weibu's is always running around! Doesn't the male protagonist know how to force Yun Zhonghe to ask for his Qing Kung Fu?

What kind of thing is this written? The main character looks like a deceiver.

So much inner strength just feels like breaking through??

The layout is too small. It would be great to cut off Duan Zhengchun.

If it is rolled one roll at a time, it will not be easy to get into trouble.

The god of the North Pluto can be sucked into a mummy? Xu Zhu didn't succeed even after absorbing the two of them. Although absorbing people's internal energy is relatively evil, but if you become a mummy, doesn't it mean that you can directly become an evil person?