The Experiment Failed, Releasing a Second Sun from the Start
开局实验失败放出第二个太阳
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 171k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Ultra Black Tech
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
99Chapters
1.5MReads
3.6kFlowers
10.0Score
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There is too much nonsense in the front, so there is no need to spend too much time describing the reactions of various countries. This will make the plot seem a bit draggy. It's not that you can't write more, but these 10 or so chapters are still a bit too much. Although it's much better than some articles about science and technology, theirs is purely watery, and the protagonist basically doesn't show up until it's on the shelves. I can tell that the author wanted to write out the atmosphere to pave the way for the protagonist to appear later, but this foreshadowing is a bit long, and less pen and ink can be used on it. I'm just expressing my own opinion. If there's anything wrong with what I said, please point it out.
The subject matter is okay, but there are many parts where I don't know what the author is writing about... Some parts of it feel like there is no need to write at all.
It was pretty good at the beginning! Later, the protagonist kept running out to experiment with weapons! It feels unreasonable! The protagonist is a national-level scientific research talent! No matter how strict the security force is or how awesome the protagonist's defense equipment is, the country will not let you go abroad! For such talents, even if the probability of an accident is one in a billion, the country would not dare to take the risk!
Washington turns into peanut stew! Why do I want to laugh so much!!
This kind of subject matter is okay, but the writing technique is a bit awkward. You can try to read high-scoring works of the same type and learn their techniques.
Is this author so friendly to the people?
Brothers can write, but everyone only reads books.
How do you write this? I almost didn't understand it after watching it for a long time.
Commentary on Chapter 7 of "The Failed Beginning Experiment and Release of the Second Sun" written by Ren Naohao. The Heavenly Ship is unwilling to lag behind.
Commentary on the chapter "The Beginning Experiment Failed to Release the Second Sun" written by Ren Naohuo. Can anyone really read this?